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Quintessential Unsung Muse!
With each new story, I become even more convinced that Lit should amend its grading scale: 1 to 5 plus "Muse" for stories that go off the top of the current grading scale.
Gosh
Great story, beautifully put together, not sure it belong in "Romance" though.
Bittersweet reminiscence
Heartfelt and wonderfully descriptive. I could smell the disenfectant. Good luck in the contest.
Another stunner
Incredibly descriptive, and masterful woven. Good luck in the contest!
Beautifully written
A strong story, well written, I like it very much.
Bittersweet
So bittersweet and sad--contemplative. It left a lump in *my* throat. Much about your work is otherworldly and this one, literally so. What we won't do for just the crumbs of love, huh? Beautiful Muse... beautiful heart.
beautiful story...
sad, and beautiful...
Tapping foot!
Hmmmm...
I see you have not forgotten how to tug on heart strings of your readers. Again and again you manage to put excellence into your writing. Thank you Muse.
Amazing
Your ability to capture the essence of a moment with such virtuosity and depth is stunning. You really write in a class of your own. Fantastic story. Good luck in the contest.
In the moment
I love how you have the talent for putting us in the moment with your characters. This one touched me, Muse. Good luck.
Incredible!
I always love your stories - they're so sweetly drugging - but this one touched me more than the others. Beautiful.
wonderful
As always ... a gorgeous piece. Your writing manages to draw the reader in every time.
nice descriptive writing
I really enjoyed reading your story.
Good luck in the contest,
Maharat
Very nicely done!
I started to skim through your story and found out I needed more, so I started back at the beginning and read every word. Very nicely done.
My complements to the author on a very well written story.
DG Hear
:) No worries
This one made me sad on some levels.. It does not diminish you to see love..i can relate to the envy but only in a good way, as means for you and your quest to fulfill.. But it is good to question oneself at times.. I liked it..cheers Yoron
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