too short
Lilywhite ... excellent scene and I know by reading your other work that it will be continued. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for the thrill. Fred (no, not the one in the story ... but I wish I was)
Let's see what happens!
Nice start, feels unfinished though. Please continue :)
I like the heroines attitude.
I realy wish you would continue this story. The "mind games" here are so freaky and hot and depraved. I especially liked the line: "Our cocks are proof of our sword of reality, while their cunts are just deep caves of nothing" So damn nasty and perverted.
Where's the rest of it?!
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Lilywhite ... excellent scene and I know by reading your other work that it will be continued. I look forward to reading more.
Thanks for the thrill.
Fred (no, not the one in the story ... but I wish I was)
Nice start...
Let's see what happens!
Nice start, feels unfinished though. Please continue :)
Really enjoyed this!
I like the heroines attitude.
I realy wish you would continue this story.
The "mind games" here are so freaky and hot and depraved.
I especially liked the line:
"Our cocks are proof of our sword of reality, while their cunts are just deep caves of nothing"
So damn nasty and perverted.
Where's the rest of it?!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to FEFE or
More submissions by lilywhite31.