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Wish You Were Here

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by Nightowl2202/12/07

This is really a good story.

I think we need to know why he isn't here, though!! He just up and left? He's away working on a job? He left for another woman [Can't imagine that one].
Hope he comes home! He would get a really warm, loving welcome!! Actually, hot!
If he doesn't come back maybe I could stop by and check on you!

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by Alvaron5302/12/07

Smokin'

Very hot story.

Now tell us why they're not together. Please. ;)

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by DoctorWyldcard03/20/07

Wow

I agree with the other commenters, this is fantastic.

I also agree, why did he leave? What did he do? What did she do? Why?

Wow, This is a great little story and I hope to the gods that you keep writing. Great job here.

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