All Comments on 'Helping a Friend'

I liked the story itself. However, I wish there had been a little more substance to it. It parts, it seemed to jump from one point to another. For example, instead of "10 minutes of licking...etc", I would have loved to see you describe what was going on. It was still a pleasant read overall.

Interesting concept, but the author put no effort into describing events well and to excite the reader.