To make it even better, get a good editor to: a) Build the context - characters/situation a little more b) Make transitions at various stages a little somoother c) Loose ends, if left untied, are done so deliberately
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Very good for a 1st submission!
To make it even better, get a good editor to:
a) Build the context - characters/situation a little more
b) Make transitions at various stages a little somoother
c) Loose ends, if left untied, are done so deliberately
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Katie and Chad or
More submissions by Supah_Bi.