All Comments on 'In the Quietness of My Breathe'

you are a busy boy.

Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit's house of Play, where it seems, you've been playing so very happily before peeking in.

A man who truely loves women ~ and has the fantasies to prove it.

A man after my own heart - truly sensual, his irrepressible sexual vibrancy recreated in fantasy.

I find your poem very rhythmic and your use of language effective. Please, write more and thanks for sharing this one. If you'd like a few ideas I have of how to improve this already fine poem you are more than welcome to send me a pm through the lit forums.

I really liked this poem. Thanks for sharing it. ~ Red

Waiting for more...

If this is what your body and mind whisper to you "in the quietness of your breathe", I dare to imagine your naked body hovering over mine when your breathe spirals into sensual moans.

This is exquisite