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I know there is not a femdom
category on this site but This is nearly the futher thing from Humor & Satire I have read on Literorica.
Very nice...
but in this category?
or am i missing something in my old age?!
also, the part about her death seems a little jerky...
Very nice story please continue
Simply put you need to write more.
Humor & Satire ?
Author on some of that stuff we smoked in Vietnam perhaps ? That made everything humerous but without some sweet mary jane I could not find any humor or satire here
Great work!
Great job! Super exciting!
Great work!
Great job! Super exciting!
Sorry, But This Just Didn't Do It For Me....
This was funny? WTF?? I must be missing the point entirely, because I find your protagonist to be a worthless POS with the self preservation instincts of a flatworm. What exactly did I miss here? Someone clue in an ‘Old Fart’. Thanks in advance.
Would love a sequel!
Definitely want to read more about the aunt, and new adventures with the cousin!
One critique would be that it jumped very quickly in to the D/s dynamic, I think Nick would put up a little more of a fight. Otherwise, thoroughly enjoyed it :)
Too short
This would have been great as a first installment to a series.
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