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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/12/07

Wow, wow, wow.....

this story was hot!!!!! The author definitely needs to keep writing and post the stories on Lit.
I definitely give the story an A++!!!

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by ChocolateConfessor02/12/07

Screw the snack...

...a post like this makes me ready for dinner!! And I was trying to just catch a quick story before heading off to bed...

Tell the author that this is a *hot* story, and that she (he?) should definitely continue it!!

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by Anonymous07/15/15

Good story

Very good writing. Nice build up. The author could flesh out Jazmyne just a little more. Would be interesting to see the play between Ashley and Jazmyne. Good story. Want to see more.

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