All Comments on 'Down on her Knees'

A most powerful read done so well; want to cheer for the gal who struck back and ended the abuse. Just a note about a couple typos that distract (the more powerful the write, the more jarring those typos): 2nd line, fifth strophe starts, "It's been to long" but should be, "It's been too long". The other's near the end, "all over here damaged body" but should read, "all over her damaged body". Watch those typos; they slip in so easily and undo good work.

How do you measure success ~ well, She's alive and He isn't.