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by Anonymous

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by sugarfairy113702/13/07

I thought it was cute

It was a very good short story. Keep them comming.

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by Anonymous02/13/07

I agree

This story was very cute. I absolutely adore it. Definitely keep them coming!

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by Anonymous07/05/12

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by Anonymous01/11/13

AWW!

this was too cute!! i love a happy ending :)

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by Anonymous05/03/13

The lack of realism worried me, with several things jarring early in the story. Given a choice between freezing to death or hobbling along on a broken foot, almost all men would hobble their way out of the forest. (I've broken a foot twice, so I know.) Then it turns out it's just a sprain? Having the guy fall asleep in the lumberjack's arms is hopelessly unrealistic - unless he had a head injury or something similar to account for it, this guy's behaviour is totally off. Then our lumberjack tells him he has "skin like a little girl". Say what? A spot of paedophilia while we're at it? Which is pretty much where I stopped reading . . .
I don't think you intended these things, but if you want to pull your readers into a story, you need to start out be setting up a believable scenario.

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by JasonStevens09/01/14

Wow I love this Alaskan Hunk!

This is a sweet story. I immediately fell in love with the Joe. This is the kind of life I dream about. Get out of this lousy city I'm in now and go live in the great outdoors with a person I love...whether it's a man or woman. I enjoyed the story and wouldn't mind it continuing. I know it's a lot of work to write these out and I appreciate what you did here. I will enjoy your other stories. Thanks for posting this.

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by HairyJacques08/16/15

Rescue

I really like the rescue and the subtle daddy/son vibe. The part when he's penetrated but feels so safe and protected was a real turn-on. Nice story!

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