All Comments on 'Bedroom Window'

by bi_cherrypie

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
whar about a threesome?

Enjoyed the story. Hope that Dad and Daughter will invite the neighbour to paticipate in a threesome thatc way she can have both holes filled at once

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Hot and steamy..

sexual encounters...mmmm, yummy.

needy_kittenneedy_kittenover 13 years ago
fat pink pussy...

suddenly I'm hungry

I would love to smell that fat pink pussy

i would love to run my nose through it's slit

slowly from bottom to top

savoring the beautiful aroma

just grazing the nub with the tip of my pink tongue

running my tongue back down the fat pink pussy slit

and sucking, gently, over her entire cunt

i loved your story

i loved your words

i love being fingered

"plump pussy" almost made me cum without anything else

thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Overkill

What was all that crap with the belt about, ffs ?

daddyjoydaddyjoyalmost 13 years ago
Keep the belt in

The belt gave an edge to the story! This is incest so pain is part of the sexual release.

Please continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good except for the end.

The story was great except for the part about her looking at you at the end. Leave that out. The story's best element is the fact that you are secretly watching them. You are seeing something intimate that you are not supposed to be seeing. It loses a little bit of its magic if she knew you were watching the whole time.

bLoner1964bLoner1964almost 7 years ago
Great

Lovely.... I wish there was a version from daughter's pov.

Thank you!

firemanlitfiremanlitalmost 6 years ago

I do not how it ended. I left when Daddy beat her with a belt

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