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Good story
The only thing is, I would have liked to see what happened to her next. You end it before the consequences hit so we can't see how much she regrets what she's done.
The other thing is, what she did seems so completely out of line with how she was her entire marriage. It's hard to believe she could be like that after being in a seemingly great marriage for many years. I would have liked to see some explanation there - was there a growing willfulness, contempt, or something? If that was the "real" her, then why didn't it surface before? Why didn't she cheat before? (It seems fairly certain she didn't from the surprise of her friend.)
But despite those quibbles, still a very good story.
Quirks
It's interesting that the brothers, Chris and Clyde, had both their wives cheat on them. Does that mean the Phillips men can't hold on to their women, or that they have poor judgement in marrying cheating cunts? I'm surprised Chris Sr. doesn't seek custody of the boys, since who knows to how many of April's future fuckbuddies she'll expose them. Neither April, nor Carl, nor Robin are likeable characters. Chris and Clyde, I'm a bit ambivalent about. They could end up in a jail (hope not). The ending seemed abrupt, but it has to end with the dissolution of the marriage. Nice job, ohio, in capturing April's "full blown narcissistic personality disorder". She wasn't shown to suffer enough.
Oops!
In my last comment, I typed "ohio" instead of "thecelt". That's what I get for having multiple browser windows open with different stories. Sorry about that.
Why do the cheating women think only the men
have to obey the vows of marriage? She said, "Chris! What about your vows to love and cherish me. Can you walk away from that? Can you?" When women think with their "vaginas" they become very dumb and full of self love and need for self gratification, maybe its just the primitive urge to procreate coming out for a new male. They will destroy their husbands, their children, their familities, themselves just to be sexed as a slut. So many women, so few worth the time to love, marry, and have a family with. A very good story with a fitting end. Never forget once a cheat, always a cheat.
Quibble
How did Carl say anything with a broken jaw and a broken rib plus other injuries? Chris behaved stupidly as did April. When Carl's shock wears off, he will talk to his buddies at the law firm and pretty soon the whole justice crew will be in jail.
I usually enjoy thecelt's stories, and this one was OK, but hardly better than nici's, or really any different all told.
note to quibble
I find it interesting that "anonymous" always has such cutsey things to say. So, he couldn't talk w/ a broken jaw, so what, the point is that Chris has a perfect alibi & 3 masked men who cannot be identified, so he risks another beating. And what about Carl, is he going to risk yet another severe beating to admit to his law firm senior partners that he was fucking a married woman on firm time, I don't think so; furthermore, if the wife is a firm client, what he's doing is a disbarrable offense in every state in this country. He's going to risk his law license & his career over a married woman, that he only wants to fuck in any event. Again, I DON'T THINK SO!.
Celt, you nailed this one, great story, kicked her slutting ass to the curb and get on w/ his life. Keep 'em coming
Yes, Nici's perspective aside ...
There are consequences.
The author nicely summed those consequences up in a cogent, focused narrative of the perils of infidelity.
Nice job of catching the pain of the husband.
Regards, Jack
Very Good
thecelt, you are one of the best authors on Literotica. I always read your stories two or three time. Please continue to write for us. Thank You.
Very Good
thecelt, you are one of the best authors on Literotica. I always read your stories two or three time. Please continue to write for us. Thank You.
A noble effort...
TC: I appreciated the details that you added to the original story. Your description of how crippling a migraine headache can be to the sufferer was on the money. Your depiction of the husband's angst was a nice addition to the story. But in using Nici's story as a template, I felt it was an attempt to make a silk purse from a sow's ear. While your female protagonist didn't exhibit the same depth of fallacious reasoning of her predecessor from Nici's version, she exhibited the same blindness to the pain and anger her actions engendered. As to her motivations, that was not in your control. Your were constrained by the parameters of the previous story. Perhaps, as with the Troubador's "How High A Price," Nici's story is a tale best left alone.
Better than NICI the lesbian bitch story- so?
this just shows fucked up in the head NICI is that her story gets remade by this author and it seems pretty good by comparison. There is No anger no rage by the husband. None. The husband calmly quietly tranquil totally fails to drive home the point that you can not LOVE someone so much and then threaten to destroy them if they dont agree..... the ending is way too short.... April cries a few tears... so what? she has not been hurt at all... she is out fucking other men and still has her job Money the house and the kids.
NEXT what happens to the wife's friend...?? why would her hsuabnd want to be married to a woman in involved in that sort of conspiracy.
EH -- Not Great but Does NOT suck either
Got agree with the last two posters. NICI story is so horrid so bad that this version by THE CELT looks like A MASTERPIECE. Still the husband looks way too calm and there is No anger in him at all. I guess that is the way men react in england? When He talks to his friends at work THEY are the ones that get even with the wife's boyfrinds and motivate him to stop whining and crying...he doesnt do it by himself.
Much better
I really appreciate the way you show true consequences for someones actions. This is so much more realistic than most stories on this site, especially that "thing" by Nici. Thanks for your efforts!
Well done!
Thanks for this and all your other stories - I really like your writing! It ended a bit abruptly, and I could quibble a bit over the change in viewpoint character (briefly switched from first person to third during one of Chris' discussions with Clyde), but it doesn't detract from your work.
A big improvement over that nonsense that Nici wrote - nicely done!
Great
It's amazing what a little friendly persuasion can do in solving problems.
Boyd
Not particularly enjoyable
Tolerable enough writing but I didn't particularly enjoy the tale. None of these characters are likeable and neither are they are moral. The story plays out and is done. Good.
Much better!
This story, while not your best, was clearly very good and much, much better than the junk that Nici posted.
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The one development that I thought short-changed the story was the assault on the lover boy lawyer. I had hoped, as I read the story, that some more clever approach would be used, perhaps such as connecting the threats that the wife was making to advice from the paramour shiester, and using that connection to threaten disbarment, or at least getting him fired. Or some other such retaliation.
Nonetheless, quite well done.
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By the way, when did Lit.com start prohibitng the use of paragraphs in readers comments? Was it because, lacking a general appreciation of grammatical correctness, they just decided to make it easy for themselves, or was it that they wanted to shorten written comments?
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Cheers!
Outstanding!
I guess many commenter either live in a fantasy world where maximum revenge is possible or do not appreciate the range of male responses to a crisis. For example, Nici's story featured a mechanic who acted like an accountant when told about her affair. But most mechanics I know, especially the good ones, are down to earth calm men not thugs. __________________________________________________ _
April really left Chris no options. I do not advocate violence but if Chris had accepted his cuckold status things would have gotten worst. She would have brought her lover to their martial bed and exposed her activities to the kids. _______________________ ___________________
Chris's other possible options include (1) Sell the house, take another job and move himself and the kids to a family friendly state/country; (2) Carve out a totally separate life for himself, moving all extra funds/assets to an overseas account and divorce April on the 18th birthday of the twins; (3)Fake his death, disappear and begin a new life leaving a insurance trust for the kids; and (4)Obtain video and pictures of April and her lover and threaten to publically exposure them (e.g., put on the internet)if she did agree to a fair divorce. _____________________________________ _______________
One of the most disturbing things about Nici's story was the passive response of the husband. He did not try to get any evidence of her cheating on him to support his case when he divorce her. At least Chris took action rather than slowly destroy his family. ____________________________
Thanks!_____________ ___________________________________
SleeplessinMD
I blew it
In my haste to post and be done with this thing, I neglected to mention a big reason why I did not like this story. The author switches from the first person omniscient point of view to third person omniscient right in the big middle of the story without so much as a "by your leave". The paragraph which begins "Clyde was shocked. He knew April well, ..." is the first example of this. After the author finishes telling us about Clyde, the point of view shifts back then later shifts again. All this leaping about made my head swim.
Changing points of view is bad authorship because it jars the continuity and the pacing of the story. We are seeing events and people through the eyes of Chris. We know what he knows and we know what he feels. Then all of sudden we're not. We've become something else, an omniscience that somehow knows what Clyde is thinking and feeling. Once the author shifted into third person omniscient, I wanted him to tell me why in the world April thought like she did. That would be no problem since third person omniscient allows the author to tell you any and everything from thoughts to feelings to actions for any and all characters.
That fifty I gave earlier really was too generous. Here's a twenty-five and it's justly deserved. I'm sad to have to give such low score because thecelt is one of my favorite authors.
Well write and cleverly conceived
This story of Celt's is one of his best, and one of the best I have read in "Loving Wives." The wife here is a really terrible women, and person. She got all of what she deserved. The sons could suffer, but Chris' character is such that as the father, he will unquestionably see to it that they have a soft landing.
RAG
Pretty Believable
Better than those where the husnad learns and doesn't confront her immediately, IMO. The actions taken are about what someone would expect. However, the husband should have had a disinterested third party present with him when the lawyer was being beat up. Otherwise, the vindictive wife can simply say that her husband went out during the time of the attack, which would probably get him convicted and allow her to make good on her promise to take everything from him.
A BAR in 50 Cal. Isn't Appropriate With Children
I understand where the Author positions this man having been there with younger children in the mix. They complicate angry decisive contemplated options in a civilized world - if you care long term. Although, even I think I might have riped this whores face off during her in his face tirades. However, the children might have had difficulty with prison visitation rights for a couple of decades and as I found out another 20 year much happier marriage to someone else who cares is possible.
So Author - I hope you understand my/our appreciation for your realities. I look forward to your next and appreciate your re-involvement in Marital Consequence even though it took a story by one who hasn't had much reality in her life to provoke you.
With Very High Regard
Sad story, but quite logical
Can't say that I "loved it" as it is a difficult subject to read about - nothing romantic or erotic just pain and betrayal (posted on Valentine's Day no less). But as others have pointed out, is much more realistic than the story that inspired it.
Good writing
This was very very very good. Posted on Valentine's day who cares. I like the message.
Loved IT!
OMG, I loved it. For once a lying, cheating, slutting wife is treated the way she should be! Her contempt for the husband is unbelievable. There are so many levels of me, me, me she displayed, it was hard to believe he didn'e beat the shit out of her. But your way was the absolute best! Thanks for a great story with characters that came to life.
I LOVE A HAPPY ENDING
Deeply satisfying, no wimp ending. Best ending/sequel yet to Nici's whorror story.
Enjoyed this scenario much more than Nici's . . .
The behavior of the hero (Chris) is more believable than the behavior of Nici's male character Jonathan (Something We Have to Talk About). There are some "holes" in the story that could get Chris into trouble, however. Using his cell (and Clyde's calling him on it) makes it easy for police to trace the conspirators. It is hardly original for someone to have another (or several others) rough up and teach a lesson to a "mark;" we saw this in The Godfather, Al Capone, and so on. Threats and intimidation. I think Carl deserves this for fooling with a married lady, and it is quite satisfying for us male readers. But it's still breaking the law, Carl could go to the cops, and it would not be difficult to find out who pulled the job with a little searching. A broken jaw and broken ribs are not trivial injuries, as anyone who has suffered broken bones can verify! Plus, the plastic surgery to repair the broken jaw is pretty expensive. I don't feel sorry for Carl but I would think Chris is at risk. As one other commented, his alibi (home with the wife and kids) might not be worth much anyway. If he ends up in jail for conspiracy for attmpted murder, he won't get to see those precious kids of his.
I think you found the essence
of what nici was trying get across. A strong willed woman vs a strong willed man. Unfortunately, marks off for grammar and continuity. Grammar was already mentioned. Main thing on continuity was that he didn't have his truck to leave that first night cuz he got a ride home. Payback to the neighbor was mentioned too but never followed up on. A version of this story I haven't seen yet is the "what's good for the goose...". Thecelt, are you willing to take a stab at that?
Hey celt!
If you were bothered by Nici's story, try on "The Reunion: Lost Love, New Lust" by LeoDavis (one word). It was submitted some time ago. The wife in that story makes Nici's heroine pale by comparison. The tale is well written but incredibly frustrating and maddening. Salvaging that story line would present a formidable challenge.
Great Story - Alvaron53 is being an asshole again!
Author- like the series and really like how you took Nici's poor excuse for a story and fixed it. As usual, please ignore the dribble that spouts from Alvaron53 [self-proclaimed Lit expert]. That idiot really needs to get a life and get laid or something. High regards for your effort and we think you have a fantasic perspective on the "Consequences" themes. We always look forward to your next installment. Faithful fans!
Someone told me once that it takes one to know one
Heh. You know what they say, "Assholes are like opinions. Everybody's got one." So I say to you, anonymous in na-na land, "Welcome to the club." If you'd like some more harsh language fu, lemme know. I'll be happy to oblige.
Have a nice day. Or not.
Rough, perhaps not rough enough
It struck me that Carl was a surrogate for the physical pain that should have rightfully been inflicted on April. Carl was not blameless, and I almost wanted him to have had his kneecaps broken instead of his jaw near the end. However, the true villain here was April.
I have noticed a rarity in these stories where the husband NEVER lays hands on his wife regardless of how thoroughly she deserves a good thrashing. For once, I would like to read where the husband pulls a Sean Connery and slaps his wife senseless, or barring that, where one of his female family members clocks the wife.
In this story, it was obvious to me that Carl stood in for April, and in doing so, she got off too lightly. Even so, this was as good and realistic response to a callous betrayal as any I have read. However, left unsaid (as usually occurs), is the wife’s motivation for not only engaging in the affair but in adopting her attitude with her husband once caught.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Great Story
Thanks for a very good story.
Third person omniscient Alvaron the 53rd is funny
is fun to watch with the pathetic look at me I have a new word to show you even if I don’t understand the stories that I read at least I will play English teacher with all the authors and give them school grades and even change them. LOL.
Thecelt, I liked this story just like all the other consequences stories you write. Keep them coming.
Freudian slip
The Celt,
As usual, I liked your story but on page three there is the one line where April becomes Susan! Would that be Nici's Susan?
--Susan looked at me in horror. "What have you done? What did you do to Carl? Oh, my God. Chris! What did you do?"
"Why, April, what ever do you mean? I've been here at home with you all--
I liked your story Celt, but you remind me of.....
...the movie called "The one". Not because of all the action, but because of how Jet Li acted. In that movie he, at least to me, played convincingly a mass murder/psychopath who was only out for himself, a wired up junkie who cared about no one, and a humble quite unassuming man who had a strong sense of justice. All in the same movie he made me see that he had multiple sides
That's kinda what I see with you. On one hand you write well. And by that I mean I can read your stuff and I get your idea of what your trying to say. I might not agree with you but I understand. But on the other hand sometimes (but not all the time) it seems like you telegraph what you are trying and that causes to me to start to expect a giving ending. But this time you didn't. I think alot of folks found Nici's ending kinda wrong. And I personally believe that it would have been less of a problem it if hadn't been defended so much. But this story seemed to having a better feel to it
The only reason I didn't give it a 100% was that I'm not a fan of violence against one person and none against the other. Don't get me wrong. I'm not saying that the wife should be abused, but I'm saying if its wrong to hit the wife, to me it's just as wrong to beat up the other man. It took both of them to repeatedly have sex. If the man was forcing her, then it's rape. And for that I have no sympathies if he get's beat up. But if they are both willing then it seems one sided to me to beat up one person and leave the other one alone.
-Risq
Thanks for bringing back sanity
The reader Phillip in Norcal brought an interesting dilemma which drew my interest as well too in stories which build on other stories. To what extent do you stay loyal to the preliminary details and where do you allow yourself to take the artistic license to add omit and change. I have no cut an clear answer. I believe that there in no such thing. It all depends on the author concept for the new/ continued story. It is I believe important though to develop A CONCEPT and to stick to it for consistency. To the extent that you change the original character you are doing more of an original story and less of a follow up. On the other extreme if you feel too committed to every detail in the original (which I don’t think that you have) then why did you need to write a follow up of your own. In some respects you kept the wife’s original traits. She is still blind to his feeling self centered and naïve about what she could achieve by coercion. The husband is moving along in getting his wits together. I found that the piece with the revenge/intimidation on the lover was both credible for his husband’s character and not impractical given the potential professional; loses that the lover could face if things came to the open. Sure, it was risky, but just calculated enough to hold water.
On the other hand the extent to which things sty pretty much the same on the communication level between them It looked like an over careful version on the original. All the actions and the leverage is shifted away from the psychological confrontation and to his actions on the lover. There could have been more to be done on changing the dynamic between them. He may not want to beat her physically but some of the emotional and psychological turmoil she had inflicted on him could have been turned back on her and the sense of deserved justice or a settled score would have felt much more convining. For example: he could have Kept her in a purposeful emotional limbo between hope and despair, giving her wrong clues and disinformation; Telling her half truths about his whereabouts –all are things shat she adopted as her techniques in dealing with him w/o a second thought. For all the emotional/ psychological abuse she gave him she comes out almost Scot free by a too linient husband.
Still, the above short coming is small compare to the sigh of relief you make when you start reading this story. Every thing seems back to the kingdom of plausibility. Back from the story by nici which seemed as if a spell of borderline insanity is hovering on it at all times. Overall I enjoyed this read.
You have done it again
Great Job
This story is beneath you.
You have pandered to the haters. Any violence gets you a quick trip to jail. Your other story, 'Where Was She', released at the same time, is much saner. I say this not to critique the ending, as that is yours, but to critique the tenor or tone of the story. You are better than this. Phil
Ah Here It Is
I know we talked about this story, and I’ve been looking for it, but missed it some how, until now.
I understand the emotionalities raised in you and others by my posting of my story.
I also understand your need to confront these emotionalities and seek some form of closure.
I therefore understand why and wherefore of many of their negative comments made against me.
Yes of course, the behavior of these men in this story would end them most likely in jail. However, let us not forget that this is a fictional story and intentioned entirely as an emotional answer to the bitter ending in my story, a means of releasing emotions.
Yet, even here in your story, my point has been shown correctly. You did an excellent job.
No matter if we do right or wrong, we fight for what “we feel” is right, our right. Even if we are in the wrong, no one turns 180 degrees at the first sign of contention. There is a progression of thought and action on our journey back from denial.
Cheating is a psychological deviation and a journey in denial. Temporary insanity? Maybe… Being cheated on violations our person, in “some ways” similar to being raped, therefore, the why of the strong emotionalities. Both persons cannot understand the other, and logically there has to be some form conflict. Conflict coming equally from both of them. (Therefore, the “equally strong” from my prologue.)
The act of cheating is very black and white, an absolute. Yet, there can be extenuating circumstances, and why there can be happy, sad, and even revengeful endings. None of them can be always wrong.
In my story, and in these sequels, the behavior of person(s) was extreme. Yet, I would hope in the future to read stories that take my idea of “equality in contention”, and show this behavior in other less extreme forms.
You are an excellent writer, whom I admire greatly, and with your story, you have proven it again.
So sad story
Thank you to this story and others
I know it's only a story but I don't understand this wife !
She said she love her husband but she don't worried she hurt him a lot.
She want too keep him as husband but she has no loyalty and no respect for him !
She want he keep his wows to her but she don't worried about her wows to him.
She thinks she can have both a winpy cuckold husband to take care of family (her, kids, house, security...) while she has a husband to betray, to humiliate, to cuckold, to laugh, to dominate ... and a lover to fuck, to wokship, to be his slut !
And if the stupid husband don't like it she could divorce and take away home, kids and money !!!!
I don't see any love from her I see only shelfish bitch who don't need a husband but a maid and a slave !
She don't love him she want enslave him !!!!
So sad story !!!
have a good day
Well done remake of a ghastly story line
Well done story of a self absorbed person who cares for no one but herself. It is sad that you have people who can not even relate what they want effects others and they only are in life to make everything just for them selves. What a waste of humanity we have in those type people. Thank you for your effort and entertainment.
PT
i agree with risq_001
the man who did it with the wife is in my opion not to blame as a quote my mother said to the wife(cheater) of a family friend "Divorce him first but under no circumstance is it alright to spread your legs for another man there is no excuse. The man is the hunter his job is to hunt the women your job as a wife is to deny access if not why have marriage vows." She also added this before elaine bobbit made it famous "if my husband cheats and I find out he will lose his mannly ness" the man is to blame some but the wifes job is to deny access......
Great Story as usual!
A fitting revenge for a slut ex-wife!
After the comments...
we still have the same situation. A man, father, husband trying to protect his family (i.e., kids). I agree with Risq_001 that April is just as accountable as Carl for the damage to Chris's family except that the violent acts were intended to end the affair and to prevent another male from violating his home like he had violated his marriage. If Chris had left which he had every right to do April would have brought Carl in the house as a surrogate Father. Unfortunately, we have seen many instances where the wife have done just that. Chris was also sending a strong message to April that she can fuck over him but she better not screw with his kids._________________________________
To Nici's point about there being two strong willed persons in a conflict there is a right and wrong. In the olden days the court system treated women like property in the marriage which was one extreme. In the no-fault judgement the courts abandoned their responsibility to judge the right or wrong of the martial conflict so everybody loses.
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April violated the martial contract and took actions which made the union impossible to continue. If this was a contract law case given these premises this case would be a slam dunk. April like Nici's wife character wanted to force the husband to live under her terms. Contempt describes what both wives had for their husband. Chris's resolution which had to be forced on April was a fair one. Chris will have to maintain two households, be visiting a Dad to his kids and live with a hole in his love life for a time. April will have a roof over her head, have to work for her wants and live with her kids knowing what kind of person she is. ________________________________________________
N ot a romantic ideal outcome (I wish that they could have ran off Carl without violence) but a realistic one.______
Thanks again...SleeplessinMD
Interesting.
I did not love the story, nor did I hate it. I enjoyed it for what it was, a well written piece. I seldom read others comments, but I did read a few this time. I am always surprised by the extreme reactions. One comment I would have is, that while I do not condone violence, I understand it, and grew up around it. The fact is that violence does occur and often and people go to jail far fewer times than some of your readers would like to believe. In this case, the attorney would have to be able to identify three unknown men, then assuming that was done, prove the husband not only knew but played a part in the attack.
So, he's the rat?
This guy keeps comparing himself to a rat! 3-4 times! what a complete loser! No wonder the woman has no respect for him; he is LIKE A RAT who is easily pushed into a corner!
He is dumb as a rat, too. Without Clyde and others, he'd be scratching his head, thinking whether or not it's better to simply allow her to have her "fun" --- mind boggling orgasms, as she tells Robin --- and stick it out, even if he's begged her not to do it, many times.
People don't reall respect desperate people who compared themselves to rats.
And the notion that Carl Cummings gonna say, "Okay, boys, you win. You hurt me and scare me so much, I'm gonna never speak to April, that slut again, whether her husband wants her back or not,,, I might even skip town, is that okay with you boys, with April's husband?",,,, the argument that that little beating by some middle class jokers gonna scare Carl Cummings, it is a FARCE!
Now, if the MAFIA or the Crips or Blood had been involved in sending that message, sure, I'm sure Carl Cummings would truly have second thoughts about contact April again, even if they should meet only once a month in Las Vegas. But NOT this dumb husband and his dumb red neck friends. The manner of this guy --- this "master mechanic" --- made him sound so stupid, no woman would respect him.
Oh, I'm sure he's dependable, faithful, and all that; but a man who keeps comparing himself to a rat pushed into a corner --- he must be an "innocent" rat, at that!, if the analogy makes any sense!, lol --- will get no more respect than a rat pushed into a corner. That's all he is: a rat pushed into a corner,,,, a small, frightened, smelly, hapless, and helpless rat pushed into a corner by a much larger cat who's on her usual nightly prowl.
Bite as he might, angry and cornered as he is, this man, like the rat he compares himself to, he is nothing more than a cornered RAT, who will eventually lose anyway, despite his valient teeth and claw attempts to scare the much more clever, bigger cat.
It's NO WONDER neither April, his wife, nor any woman (including the neighbor, Robin?), have much respect for a stupid, cornered rat such as this creature.
The story is really that HAD THE "CAT", April, let him munch on those little crumbs, and not chased him to the corner, he would have let April fuck all she wants, so long as she didn't use any "hurtful" words or make explicit demands, that he lick her after she freshly fuck her lover....
What a great "rat" he would have been, had the big bad cat not chased into a corner! He could have been happily munching on those little crumbs,,,, except the big, bad cat had to corner him like that! It's so sad and unfair, when he had to fight his way out of that corner, biting the big great cat in two! LOL
Freakin' stupid analogy, if you asked me.
A Powerful Bull Analogy
If you must make dumb analogies....
Since I took the AUTHOR to task on his silly --- and I believe erroneous --- anology, I'm gonna have to offer what I think a more VALID, a more sound, example of what the husband would be compared to: a big, dumb, but big and highly dangerous BULL.
Here's a monologue the big, dumb, but highly dangerous bull could do:
"I may be a big, dumb bull. And you could think yourself as the higly agile, highly decorated, highly sophisticated, highly accomplished and heroic MATADOR, April, dear wife... But, remember, despite all those eventually fatal little sharp swords you've been thrusting into my body, to the thundering crowds of matador hero worshippers, REMEMBER that ONE FALSE MOVE on your part and I CAN TEAR YOU TO PIECES, hurting you so much, so deep, your survival may not be better than mine..... Remember THAT, April."
Now, THAT would start a truly intelligent person from thinking deep and hard! But a little small, smelly, helpless rat who is cornered and is merely making a few hissing sound, bearing a few small teeth to a much larger animal? Na, no respect for that!
Good
A good read but April deserved more pain. Thanks.
Nici I enjoyed your tale while
I also disapproved of it. And no there is no form of adultry that is justified, if you must have someone outside of the marriage then divorce before doing so. Otherwise you have no intergerity because if a persons given word is not held to then that person is less than nothing.
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