A Good Student

Unbelievably hot. Just unreal.

Amazing

I got choked up, too. This fucking touched my soul. Beautiful little story, so much more than just sexy.

This is mind blowing

Okay, aside from this story being unbelievably hot, it also made me cry.
Mr. D is so perfect.
And I thank you, author, because I've felt exactly like Emma, and I've always felt like a freak for being the way I am. I'm young and (regrettably) a virgin because I've always felt like I'd have to settle because the guy I wanted didn't exist.
Mr. D was so unique in how he treated her, it was different from other stories. I love it and I, with tears in my eyes, thank you for showing me that I can find someone perfect.

A Good Read

Whilst this story might not appeal to some people, it was indeed a story and what I look for when I read erotica.

PROFESSOR CONNER SAID "WORDS ARE MY SPECIALTY"

If only that were true for the author. however:
she did everything except fellate her pen put her hands between her legs (THIS PASSAGE MAKES NO SENSE WHATSOEVER WHAT ARE YOU SAYING????)
A knew (I)
Here eyes (Her)
class room (classroom)
one time (one-time)
zhlubs (shlubs)
one (of) the plate
tail lights (taillights)
hot, impotent bursts (HOW CAN BURSTS OF CUM BE IMPOTENT???? THEY ARE SIGNS OF POTENCY!!!! )
Novel (novel)
Big Project (big project)
spread hr knees (her)
woman's gravid tit (I WONDER WHAT THIS MEANS IN ENGLISH!!!!)
ass his the edge (hit)
any more (anymore)
could se those (see)
drooling like a rabid cobra (DO COBRAS DROOL OR DO THEY SPIT????) (CAN A REPTILE BE RABID????) (AMBIGUOUS IMAGE)
Fucking (fucking)
let go over her (of)
couldn't even breath (breathe)
This was an entertaining story enough so that I look forward to reading the remaining four with interest.

Poetic prose.

I read the comment from the anonymous grammar Nazi. It's true that there were some grammatical faux pas, some of which were probably typos. Beyond that, the story was beautiful. Do you write poetry like the teacher does? The story seemed to flow like a poem. Who really cares if cobras drool? I really like this Dom. He will treat her the way a loving and loved sub should be. 5 stars.

Very well written

So....where did you teach? :P

Oh hell yeah...

Sign me up for that class...

Never knew you could come just from reading

No hands...just quietly writhing on my back, reading, and pushing myself into my mattress...

Where were you when I was Emma's age?

More please...

This is the absolute best story I've read on lit! I felt like I was Emma.

Wow

After reading this, I don't think I want to write erotica anymore. This was so great, I would never be able to accomplish anything close to this. Simply amazing!

I came twice

I came twice after reading this.... It was so incredibly erotic and elaborate
My hands slipped down my panties at the very beginning and didnt come out till the very end after I had come twice
Thank you for this..... Keep writing
PS You can have me anytime... Just hold me after that like you held Emma

Fantastic!

After having to get over the name for the teacher (personal reasons) I found this story absolutely amazing!! Made me cum 3 times!

Touching the primal sexgod inside

Thank you, Sir! This is such a fine piece of art. Your writing is so full of heart and soul, you seem to think about writing BDSM-stories just like your character Conner D. does. No simple repitition of the typical nasty phrases here, not just another short-story to jerk off to, but something that succeeded in touching something in me, that made me felt understood. Keep the good work up, can't wait to read more of this inspiring stuff. Greetings from Germany, TopDomKrizzly. Thumbs up!