Excellent! An excellent story of seduction, control, patience, focus, caring, loving and hot sex.
Gave it a 5 for the writing, for the honesty, for portraying D/s as I know it. It is so much different to want to possess another person as the professor did in the story, and using someone for fucking, without feeling. You struck a fine balance between control and caring, pushing the envelope and attentiveness and responsiveness to the woman.
Please! Write more.
Thank you.
It's good to see you again. This story is a real surprise, full of a good sort of passion, intense with lust and even some hope -- things I'm used to finding in your work, but not so prominent I suppose.
Thanks, Softouch911
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Anonymous02/27/07
Hypnotic
I was completely spellbound.
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Anonymous03/06/07
perfect.
This has two of my turn-ons in it: professor/student sex, which is done often but usually not this well, and cock-spanking a clit, which isn't done nearly enough and when it is done, it's always short. You gave it a couple of paragraphs, which I appreciated greatly.
What an exquisite piece of work. You drew both characters so fully. The passion both of them showed was marvelous.
I was especially struck by how you manage to sneak honest caring in there, make this a far richer story with emotions not often displayed in these sorts of work.
Very well done.
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Anonymous03/12/07
Freakin hot!
This girl is totally me. And just when I think your stories couldn't get any hotter you outdo yourself and just tap into something so incredibly sensual. I loved, loved, loved it! Thanks for writing it. Katie
It was really one of the most amazing stories I have ever read on this site. So articulate and well thought out. Describing things so eloquently. I've just never read passion described so perfectly. The act of giving and recieving, being ashamed to have what one really wants. I believe you have captured that essence perfectly in this story. Rarely does a story interest me enough to read more these days, but you have me intrigued. Thank you, authors like yourself make reading more interesting.
This is a gorgeous piece of writing, and one of the most intense relationship stories I've read in a long, long time. It's also the first piece of yours that I've read... and I see I have a lot of reading ahead of me.
Thank you for letting us into the soul of a dom. I'm surprised to see how strongly it resonates in me.
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Anonymous06/27/07
Fucking amazing.
Thanks so much for elaborating upon the inner workings of both the submissive and dominant mind.Well done.
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Anonymous06/28/07
A Must Read!
Absolutely amazing! This story has left me breathless...
I'll be staying up late to read the next chapters of this story since I can't stop myself...it's just too good!
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Anonymous07/23/07
AMAZING
Wow...this story is written so well! It is absolutely captivating. You had me spell-bound..I can't wait to read more!
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Anonymous07/30/07
Mind Blowing
Beautiful and sensual in all the right ways. I hope there's more to come...
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Anonymous08/07/07
Gasp
That was amazing! I somehow leave the story feeling a part of the characters. It held me breathless till the very end!
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Anonymous08/13/07
leave my comment on this "submission"
little did they know, literotica, when they titled that invitation.
i loved your story...how the buildup of the plot paralleled that of the actual sex...this is probably the best i've read so far! absolutely loved it, and plan to check you out and see if you've written more:)
I'll definately have to check out more of your stuff. This was pretty f'ing brilliant, but something tells me you've got a lot more to offer. Because I belive in constructive comments rather than just a 'That's so fucking hot!!', I can really appriciate getting into your guy's mind. Any idiot can take a snap shot of a scene and write down what's happening, but that extra bit where you get a hint at the why of it demands a little more...I don't know, fuck. Just a little MORE. Anyway, just so you know that your shit's not mindless drivle wasted in a slpatter of jiz on my wall.
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Anonymous09/25/07
very impressed
This is the best I've ever read! I am seeing someone new, and I plan to show him this story... I hope it will help him understand the appeal of BDSM. If not - well, I guess I'll just be back here more often!
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Anonymous09/27/07
I don't have a constructive comment
Only a fantastic orgasm. Thank you.
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Anonymous10/30/07
*meow*
God. I definately didn't think that men could right erotica, but you changed my mind. I have a teacher that I wish would tie me against a desk and lash me with something, god it could be a stapler for all I care... All I can say is thankyou.
okay so my real life experience he was not a teacher. But what he showed me and I showed him.. was soo much like this and yes described well, graphic in the right way to bring the image to ones own mind. The description of how the "teacher" writes describes so much how I feel about my own erotic writing guess I need to nerve up now and share it thanks for sharing yours I am a FAN and wish I could find my teacher again
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Anonymous11/15/07
Excellent!
This was excellent it captured the sensitive and longing side of bdsm as well as the helplessness that makes bdsm so enjoyable. It was worded superbly and flowed beautifully, this was amazing.
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Anonymous12/07/07
The work of a real writer
This was written by a highly intelligent person.
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Anonymous12/19/07
Thank you.
It was truly lovely to read something that I could relate to so well. I won't go into details, but I believe you've helped me to understand myself better, and although I'm no where near comfortable with the things I feel... yet.. I atleast have the thought that perhaps one day I will be.
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Anonymous12/31/07
You're probably my favorite writer
this was an amazing read ... it made me a little sad for the life i left behind
I loved everything about it, but where was that quote from?
"Darkness stirs my soul," I quoted. "Desires whose name I cannot speak. His flesh is within me, his raging lust upon me. I am his anger and his joy, his sickness and its cure. He shames me with my pleasure and tames me with his rage, till all dissolves between us and he sees me as I am."
I feel truly overwhelmed and exposed by this story and I am both captivated and blessed by your gift. You have articulated longings in my heart that were almost unidentifiable and certainly unexplored. Thank you...
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Anonymous06/08/08
Unbelievable
Read #3 first, and came back to this one. If it weren't so late I would keep reading. I will have to remember and come back another time. AMAZING!! You do have a way with words (my biggest weakness) and oh dear you had me really quickly. Thank you so much for wonderful stories! Your description of personality and perception of sexuality is just about hitting the nail on the head for me. Thanks so much again! I look forward to reading the rest of them!! :)
This is one of the very few stories I have read that captures what being a feminine female is all about. I read it wanting to yell out "yes! yes!" and not just because it made me come ;).
Seriously, it's perfectly written...
This, I believe is what TRUE feminism is about. It's a shame how so many women are so afraid to embrace it in themselves.
Thank you very much for sharing! =)
Fantastic descriptions, excellent dialog, and such an incredibly sexy story. The discussion of domination and how he carries it out is enviable. Can't wait to read the rest.
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Anonymous10/06/08
WoW!!
I have read a lot of stories on this site and I must say yours is one of the better one.
Poetry in motion.
Well dr_mabeuse. This is some story. There are a few careless slips, but they are overwhelmed by the intensity of the writing. And it seems to have turned my woman on too.
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Anonymous01/12/09
Wow
I have to say you caught the mind set of a submissive female incredibly well with undeniable realism. The fact that he is 'conquered by her submission' is so true. Both me and my dom enjoyed this very much.
We often read that BDSM happens in only one way, repeated over and over, but an experienced man and woman respond each in their won ways. The feeling is incredibly intense and the woman discovers who she is. The man does the same. This not only was great writing, it was based on reality, not some formula.
The description of the student is deliciously hot combining her lust and her vulnerability. It ends with their wanting more.
So damned good! Must read the rest.
I usually try to write comments more intellectual than this, though really it's all been said, and you don't need me to tell you how brilliant your writing is. But I'll say it anyway. Brilliant. I can't wait to read more.
English
Excellent
As always, most excellent!
Thank you for writing well, thank you for good sex, thank you for exploring the "mind" side of this subject!
I will look forward to more chapters as we follow the life of this "good student"!
The mind as the sexiest organ
Excellent! An excellent story of seduction, control, patience, focus, caring, loving and hot sex.
Gave it a 5 for the writing, for the honesty, for portraying D/s as I know it. It is so much different to want to possess another person as the professor did in the story, and using someone for fucking, without feeling. You struck a fine balance between control and caring, pushing the envelope and attentiveness and responsiveness to the woman.
Please! Write more.
Thank you.
A good start to Emma's story.
I am looking forward to more of her story.
finally
you're back!!
amazing story.
Welcome back!
It's good to see you again. This story is a real surprise, full of a good sort of passion, intense with lust and even some hope -- things I'm used to finding in your work, but not so prominent I suppose.
Thanks, Softouch911
Hypnotic
I was completely spellbound.
perfect.
This has two of my turn-ons in it: professor/student sex, which is done often but usually not this well, and cock-spanking a clit, which isn't done nearly enough and when it is done, it's always short. You gave it a couple of paragraphs, which I appreciated greatly.
Damn Zoot
You're good.
What an exquisite piece of work. You drew both characters so fully. The passion both of them showed was marvelous.
I was especially struck by how you manage to sneak honest caring in there, make this a far richer story with emotions not often displayed in these sorts of work.
Very well done.
Freakin hot!
This girl is totally me. And just when I think your stories couldn't get any hotter you outdo yourself and just tap into something so incredibly sensual. I loved, loved, loved it! Thanks for writing it. Katie
Is it warm in here? Or is it just me?
Holymary. This story rates a fainting couch, a vial of smelling salts and all seven Day-of-the-Week panties.
I have to go now. Hands shking, cant typ so good.
Wow, I'm impressed
I enjoyed this story very much. Can't wait to read more.
Loved it
I am so jealous of Emma! You've captured the things I feel perfectly, and I can't wait to read more. Please don't let this end!
Awesome just awesome!
wow that was amazing, i know what exactly how Emma feels. thank you for that, looking forward to reading more!
Nothing Short of amazing ...
It was really one of the most amazing stories I have ever read on this site. So articulate and well thought out. Describing things so eloquently. I've just never read passion described so perfectly. The act of giving and recieving, being ashamed to have what one really wants. I believe you have captured that essence perfectly in this story. Rarely does a story interest me enough to read more these days, but you have me intrigued. Thank you, authors like yourself make reading more interesting.
Stunning
This is a gorgeous piece of writing, and one of the most intense relationship stories I've read in a long, long time. It's also the first piece of yours that I've read... and I see I have a lot of reading ahead of me.
Thank you for letting us into the soul of a dom. I'm surprised to see how strongly it resonates in me.
Fucking amazing.
Thanks so much for elaborating upon the inner workings of both the submissive and dominant mind.Well done.
A Must Read!
Absolutely amazing! This story has left me breathless...
I'll be staying up late to read the next chapters of this story since I can't stop myself...it's just too good!
AMAZING
Wow...this story is written so well! It is absolutely captivating. You had me spell-bound..I can't wait to read more!
Mind Blowing
Beautiful and sensual in all the right ways. I hope there's more to come...
Gasp
That was amazing! I somehow leave the story feeling a part of the characters. It held me breathless till the very end!
leave my comment on this "submission"
little did they know, literotica, when they titled that invitation.
oh
my
fucking
god
you've done me.
excellent
i loved your story...how the buildup of the plot paralleled that of the actual sex...this is probably the best i've read so far! absolutely loved it, and plan to check you out and see if you've written more:)
Best story I have ever read
Thank You.
Best story I have ever read
Thank You.
Absolutly amazing!
extremly well written and explained!
CoolCool
I'll definately have to check out more of your stuff. This was pretty f'ing brilliant, but something tells me you've got a lot more to offer. Because I belive in constructive comments rather than just a 'That's so fucking hot!!', I can really appriciate getting into your guy's mind. Any idiot can take a snap shot of a scene and write down what's happening, but that extra bit where you get a hint at the why of it demands a little more...I don't know, fuck. Just a little MORE. Anyway, just so you know that your shit's not mindless drivle wasted in a slpatter of jiz on my wall.
very impressed
This is the best I've ever read! I am seeing someone new, and I plan to show him this story... I hope it will help him understand the appeal of BDSM. If not - well, I guess I'll just be back here more often!
I don't have a constructive comment
Only a fantastic orgasm. Thank you.
*meow*
God. I definately didn't think that men could right erotica, but you changed my mind. I have a teacher that I wish would tie me against a desk and lash me with something, god it could be a stapler for all I care... All I can say is thankyou.
perfect
you're just perfect.
amazing story.
de ja vue
okay so my real life experience he was not a teacher. But what he showed me and I showed him.. was soo much like this and yes described well, graphic in the right way to bring the image to ones own mind. The description of how the "teacher" writes describes so much how I feel about my own erotic writing guess I need to nerve up now and share it thanks for sharing yours I am a FAN and wish I could find my teacher again
Excellent!
This was excellent it captured the sensitive and longing side of bdsm as well as the helplessness that makes bdsm so enjoyable. It was worded superbly and flowed beautifully, this was amazing.
The work of a real writer
This was written by a highly intelligent person.
Thank you.
It was truly lovely to read something that I could relate to so well. I won't go into details, but I believe you've helped me to understand myself better, and although I'm no where near comfortable with the things I feel... yet.. I atleast have the thought that perhaps one day I will be.
You're probably my favorite writer
this was an amazing read ... it made me a little sad for the life i left behind
perfect
you know how to touch me... so perfect.
...
I don't even know what to say.
Beautiful.
Thank you.
Your story is perfectly crafted an absolute joy to read! Thank you. Thank you for posting them so that others may enjoy your skillful writing.
Loved it,
I loved everything about it, but where was that quote from?
"Darkness stirs my soul," I quoted. "Desires whose name I cannot speak. His flesh is within me, his raging lust upon me. I am his anger and his joy, his sickness and its cure. He shames me with my pleasure and tames me with his rage, till all dissolves between us and he sees me as I am."
I am undone
I feel truly overwhelmed and exposed by this story and I am both captivated and blessed by your gift. You have articulated longings in my heart that were almost unidentifiable and certainly unexplored. Thank you...
Unbelievable
Read #3 first, and came back to this one. If it weren't so late I would keep reading. I will have to remember and come back another time. AMAZING!! You do have a way with words (my biggest weakness) and oh dear you had me really quickly. Thank you so much for wonderful stories! Your description of personality and perception of sexuality is just about hitting the nail on the head for me. Thanks so much again! I look forward to reading the rest of them!! :)
Lovely
Absolutely perfect...
hot
You know how to turn a woman on with your writing. I practically came myself just reading it without doing anything. Please write more!
The core of true femininity
This is one of the very few stories I have read that captures what being a feminine female is all about. I read it wanting to yell out "yes! yes!" and not just because it made me come ;).
Seriously, it's perfectly written...
This, I believe is what TRUE feminism is about. It's a shame how so many women are so afraid to embrace it in themselves.
Thank you very much for sharing! =)
Marvelous
Fantastic descriptions, excellent dialog, and such an incredibly sexy story. The discussion of domination and how he carries it out is enviable. Can't wait to read the rest.
WoW!!
I have read a lot of stories on this site and I must say yours is one of the better one.
Poetry in motion.
thank you
Well dr_mabeuse. This is some story. There are a few careless slips, but they are overwhelmed by the intensity of the writing. And it seems to have turned my woman on too.
Wow
I have to say you caught the mind set of a submissive female incredibly well with undeniable realism. The fact that he is 'conquered by her submission' is so true. Both me and my dom enjoyed this very much.
Real
We often read that BDSM happens in only one way, repeated over and over, but an experienced man and woman respond each in their won ways. The feeling is incredibly intense and the woman discovers who she is. The man does the same. This not only was great writing, it was based on reality, not some formula.
The description of the student is deliciously hot combining her lust and her vulnerability. It ends with their wanting more.
So damned good! Must read the rest.
Fantastic
I usually try to write comments more intellectual than this, though really it's all been said, and you don't need me to tell you how brilliant your writing is. But I'll say it anyway. Brilliant. I can't wait to read more.
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