This first chapter is really great. The other chapter
is another evaluation and even though you may not
agree with what the Celt's characters do, they are
well drawn and usually coherent. For me the big pain
would have the lack of love over the previous six monthes and the fact that Paula knew that he was trying to patch up
their differences in a three day weekend. Which she starts
off by betraying him.
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Anonymous01/26/09
Well now putting things off does have a way of
shoving it in your face. If he was a work he had time to begin the divorce and get things straightened out. Not doing your homework makes it easy for others to assume control over you. The wife is a skank and one of the worst possible types of slut. Total and complete disrespect for her husband and her marriage, which includes her children. Will we learn the brother is the father of the kids? A shame he did not make it clearer to his brother to move away somewhere else. Saying he could not prevent the wife living there was a lie, legally it oculd have been done, now it can be done by the wife. He should have stayed there and thrown her stuff out with the overnight bag spilled on top of it. A shame the guy doesnt have the ability to think.
Apparently Paula had given the quack a blowjob for his cooperation. She was the cause of the problem in the first place, to force a husband to take the backstabbing slut back was immoral and unethical.
What a hard call for Del. His wife cheated with his brother now he has to move back home to help care for the injured son. Tough one. I'll check out ch 2 and give my final ruling at a later time.
The doctor insists on including Paula?? The doctor insists on leaving Jessie out??
Well FUCK THAT!! The doctor is getting paid to do a job, not order my ass around... Jessie WILL be in this conference, or we'll get another doctor. Who is paying for this fiasco anyway??
As for Jim's care, fine, Paula stays home and cares for him if she wants to; if she doesn't, we'll get a live-in CNA. This looks to be as good as it gets, so the divorce can begin ASAP.
bullshit! i just came back from the hospital today visiting a relative who had the exact same problem, a rupture of a blood vessel in the brain. TIME IS CRITICLE AND ALWAYS IS! the time the character spent lying on the ground added to his condition, it was not over at the time of rupture, it is the pressure that developes from the bleeding.
so the first condition for them getting back together, she did not contribute by being out all night fucking, is BULLSHIT!
“Let me explain. Let me tell you what happened.” – What is there to explain? She CHEATED on him with his BROTHER! What POSSIBLE explanation can even come CLOSE to excusing that?
“He was shocked that I had found out about them.” – Well, he left an obvious message on their HOME answering machine, even if he wasn’t expecting him home so soon, he shouldn’t be “shocked” that he must have heard the message!
John says that it was just the “one time”, but that doesn’t explain them having a “usual place”, or her distance for the past year or so, and John was certainly EXPECTING another occurrence, even if that had been the only time, SO FAR! And it doesn’t explain her anger at Del when he asked where she had been.
“Is something wrong with my son?" – Not “OUR” son?
"Is something wrong with my son?" – Not “OUR” son?"
Does this lead us to believe that DNA testing is in order? Is this really the first time? What about the daughter's DNA? Once the doubts about the integrity of the wife start, there is no end in sight.
What a dilemma.... Of course all focus is in Jim.... Sorry but I'd have decked the bro in the hospital, that voice message sure wasn't too accidental, what a stupid bro (one of the kids could have heard it too).... Now Del has to endure her and be reminded daily of being the family cuck... Sorry but Grandparents need to know - all.
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Old Favorite Time
This first chapter is really great. The other chapter
is another evaluation and even though you may not
agree with what the Celt's characters do, they are
well drawn and usually coherent. For me the big pain
would have the lack of love over the previous six monthes and the fact that Paula knew that he was trying to patch up
their differences in a three day weekend. Which she starts
off by betraying him.
Well now putting things off does have a way of
shoving it in your face. If he was a work he had time to begin the divorce and get things straightened out. Not doing your homework makes it easy for others to assume control over you. The wife is a skank and one of the worst possible types of slut. Total and complete disrespect for her husband and her marriage, which includes her children. Will we learn the brother is the father of the kids? A shame he did not make it clearer to his brother to move away somewhere else. Saying he could not prevent the wife living there was a lie, legally it oculd have been done, now it can be done by the wife. He should have stayed there and thrown her stuff out with the overnight bag spilled on top of it. A shame the guy doesnt have the ability to think.
I would have fired the Doctor immediately!
Apparently Paula had given the quack a blowjob for his cooperation. She was the cause of the problem in the first place, to force a husband to take the backstabbing slut back was immoral and unethical.
I agree with
John about the .
Wow a tough situation
What a hard call for Del. His wife cheated with his brother now he has to move back home to help care for the injured son. Tough one. I'll check out ch 2 and give my final ruling at a later time.
whew
The doctor needs to be replaced
The doctor insists on including Paula?? The doctor insists on leaving Jessie out??
Well FUCK THAT!! The doctor is getting paid to do a job, not order my ass around... Jessie WILL be in this conference, or we'll get another doctor. Who is paying for this fiasco anyway??
As for Jim's care, fine, Paula stays home and cares for him if she wants to; if she doesn't, we'll get a live-in CNA. This looks to be as good as it gets, so the divorce can begin ASAP.
bullshit! i just came back from the hospital today visiting a relative who had the exact same problem, a rupture of a blood vessel in the brain. TIME IS CRITICLE AND ALWAYS IS! the time the character spent lying on the ground added to his condition, it was not over at the time of rupture, it is the pressure that developes from the bleeding.
so the first condition for them getting back together, she did not contribute by being out all night fucking, is BULLSHIT!
Loved it
What a brilliant and heart wrenching tale. Five stars.
Good Read****
Thanks for sharing.
So far...
I think this is your best. 5*s all the way!
Too Depressing
One chapter was enough
Thoughts
“Let me explain. Let me tell you what happened.” – What is there to explain? She CHEATED on him with his BROTHER! What POSSIBLE explanation can even come CLOSE to excusing that?
“He was shocked that I had found out about them.” – Well, he left an obvious message on their HOME answering machine, even if he wasn’t expecting him home so soon, he shouldn’t be “shocked” that he must have heard the message!
John says that it was just the “one time”, but that doesn’t explain them having a “usual place”, or her distance for the past year or so, and John was certainly EXPECTING another occurrence, even if that had been the only time, SO FAR! And it doesn’t explain her anger at Del when he asked where she had been.
“Is something wrong with my son?" – Not “OUR” son?
A MED TRAGEDY IS TERRIBLE
coupled with a personal one is atrocious. TK U MLJ LV NV
first, I wouldn't leave her shit.
She has a job, let her pay the bills. Second, I agree with the rest, get rid of the Doc.
"Is something wrong with my son?" – Not “OUR” son?"
Does this lead us to believe that DNA testing is in order? Is this really the first time? What about the daughter's DNA? Once the doubts about the integrity of the wife start, there is no end in sight.
Second time through...
A great start. Still love it. Still five stars.
Crap
Typical RAAC garbage.
What a dilemma
What a dilemma.... Of course all focus is in Jim.... Sorry but I'd have decked the bro in the hospital, that voice message sure wasn't too accidental, what a stupid bro (one of the kids could have heard it too).... Now Del has to endure her and be reminded daily of being the family cuck... Sorry but Grandparents need to know - all.
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