I just don't understand the men and women in these stories. Is it the same stupid, stupid women in each story? Don't husband and wives in these stories ever talk? I guess if the women were not stupid and they actually talked to each other we wouldn't have stories. It was actually a good story until everybody kept telling him it was his fault. She planned this, she brought a bag with her sexy clothes, the brother called her at home to gloat over his conquest and plan for more. This guy needs a new daughter, wife and friends. It was not his fault. I would still blame her for not being there when the son had his problem. She is a cheat period. Another thing I don't understand is why the husband needs to know why she did it. She cheated, who cares what the reason is, she is a cheater. I saw the reconciliation coming and I kept hoping that I was wrong and he would keep some dignity.
so I wasn't prepared for his daughter to turn on him or for his wife to feel it was his fault because she didn't tell him she wasn't getting enough attention so she had to impale herself on his brother's cock to make up for it. And I guess I have to fuck all my female friends now so I can keep them. I know that you aren't writing anymore but gee whiz why couldn't you give it a rest about the fact that he expected fidelity from his wife and faithful family members was just his male ego and his pride. The fact that he had expectations of his wife keeping her vows and she chose not to is not a flaw on his part.
In most of these cases no one is really innocent or guilty,it hapens so many times most of the times it doesn't get out but when it does it can be dramatic ,i know the storys here on lit allmost allways blame the woman but is the husband so innocent? a woman ignored can feel the need for attention and when the right person with the right talk and moves comes along she might sucomb to the temptation ,if hubby wouldn't have ignored her ,had payed attention to her i'm sure this never would have happend ,he should have been there not his brother,one mistake,even as big as it was shouldn't mean the end of the world if both recognise theyr fault
A final word ,the biggest cheaters are men ,the fall to temptation much easier just to see nice breasts or a cute ass ,please just be honnest about it
A funny thing about most marriages that go the distance (until the kids are grown) is that by that time, the relationship is pretty much shot. There has been so much scar tissue built up the only thing holding the marriage together are the scabs. I can understand how the emotionally weak would feel the need to stay in a shitty, adulterated marriage, but a stronger person would have to guts to call it a day and to move on. Living with someone that you do not trust or like is much worse than living alone. If you desire companionship, get a dog or two. If you want a real marriage, find someone who is strong enough and caring enough to be a wife. While there are plenty of decent women out there, there are a lot more indecent women out there too. So chose carefully.
his wife cheat and her daughter is just stupid as her mother. you tried to blame del in this chapter but it aint working, it just make him a wimp. they should just divorced and move on with their life. what a cuck story
I liked it. Mostly believable but as already said she should have talked with him ( husband) and told him how she felt not replace his affection with another mans.
“It's not my place to tell Jim about what mom did. That's between Jim and mom.” – That’s right, it’s between Jim and MOM, SHE should tell Jim, not put it on Del’s shoulders!
I’m not often in agreement with the hard-liners here, but this putting all the blame on him is aggravating! So she didn’t/doesn’t “love” John – so what! She had SEX with him! It’s up to Del to decide IF and/or WHEN to divorce, and if he’s not ready, and if his hesitance is causing problems, then regardless of how much she doesn’t want a divorce Paula needs to force the issue and file herself! Del is the wronged party here, and doesn’t deserve any harassment.
He SHOULDN’T feel any guilt! While not LEGALLY separated, they HAVE been separated for months, and he shouldn’t be expected to be a monk for all that time.
Does he have some blame for not acting more loving towards her? Sure! But what about HER? Was SHE coming on to him? No halfway healthy, normal man is going to reject the advances of his loving wife, ESPECIALLY if she has stayed in shape!
Again, if she felt that she and Del were drawing apart, what did SHE do to correct that?
I don't have a particular problem if he feels that he can trust her enough to reconcile, in some ways it's not that much different than if they DID divorce and he met a woman who had cheated before, but I don't like how much of the blame still seems to be shunted onto him.
She cheats with his brother, look at the end. He says " My brother John was not invited and he did not attend. I haven't spoken to him since that day in the hospital. He did send a card, postmarked Costa Rica, but no other return address. I don't care to ever see him again." So let me get this right, your holding your brother to a higher standard than your wife. She's forgiven, the one you took vows with, the mother of your children, the one who said forsaking all other. Family members fight all the time. But your not spending the rest of your life with your brother. Your placing most of the blame on him and the husband. Is his wife made out of glass, did her brain crack while she was on his brothers dick? Wow, there's this 2 letter answer for him getting some pussy, "NO" how hard was that. (2)
all RAAC stories are the same. his dumb cunt of a daughter blames him for tearing their family apart. not her mother for having a long affair with his brother. no its all his fault. i only wish i could give it a lower score.
I was about to btb when the wife left about where she was. I had to ask myself from the husband perspective. Would he be happier married or divorced. He choose. That didn't make him any less of a man. It his decision. Comparing her to most wives of the consequences series and husband response. I would not judge his decision harshly.
See, I admit, once it started to be HIS fault that SHE slept with someone else (giving me the author's mindset in this story) I started skimming instead of honestly reading...
Now it sure seemed to me like I read HER say that she slept with the brother because that was (effectively) the cost of keeping his companionship... Did I get that right...? If so, he NEEDS to divorce her...
Not because sure slept with someone else... but because her REASON indicates she's willing to pay someone WITH her body to stay her friend (incidentally, "being friends" being one of the things you shouldn't have to "pay" someone for), and why would he trust her to not repeat it for ANOTHER "friend"...?
Because she promised...? Because she VOWED not to...? Yeah, like that stopped her the first time...? Eh!! Game over.
Oh, and another killer to the marriage...? Her saying she didn't KNOW why she finally succumbed... If SHE doesn't know, how do you ever KNOW it won't happen again...? Without that assurance, you're just waiting for some unknown action or thought to cause a repeat...Who needs THAT kind of aggravation...?
And HIM...? Paraphrasing, "I know she feels bad for having cheated and I feel bad THAT she cheated... so we should just feel bad together." Of course, with that kind of thinking, just imahine how close they can be as she cheats with other people and they can share THOSE pains too...
So the phone message that Del heard somehow doesn't reflect the story as related by the wife.
Phone message: "Hey babe, where did you go? I woke expecting to find you still in bed beside me. Please call and let me know where you are, OK? Last night was really great for me. Call me when you get in. I'd like to get together one more time before Finnie gets back. Why don't you meet me at our usual place. Call me. Love you."
Her explanation: "He wanted to do it again but I couldn't! I refused and he got angry. I didn't care. I just wanted to forget it and pretend it never happened. I curled up on the bed as he yelled at me and I think I passed out. At least I don't remember anything more until I woke up later and saw he was asleep. I dressed and left. I had just gotten home when you called."
There was a lot of good writing in this story but I find the justification for the reconciliation to be very weak.
Still five stars. Still love it. The end does not seem believable. She did it only once? Doesn't seem to fit the details in chapter one. The insertion of him not having sex with her seemed a convenient afterthought.
He knew his brother is a bitch at the same time he knew what he wasn't doing at home. The subject of a wife cheating with the brother is a very hard to deal with. Most people will not ever forgive either of the two for their betrayal.
For me it is possible to forgive the wife if she is the person you loved, believed when she expressed her regret for making the mistake. The brother like I said was a Bitch for even attempting to screw his brothers wife and family. For him to choose his family over his brother was made easier by his brothers actions. Writer a lot of people think a brother is just a piece of gold but, to be gold you have to be a good brother. In the beginning I through he would throw out his family for the brother until he told what he knew about his brother. Yes he broke her face when he told her about sleeping with Lena. He really didn't have to Paula after she felt the pain about her sleeping with the brother could have saved face.
"That question was what stopped me from trying to get past this and save my marriage"
This and everything subsequent related to it was Inconsistent with his character from the first chapter. That guy would never in a million years history have considered reconciliation.
This chapter is not consistent with the first one in other ways also, feels like somewhere. between the first and second chapter the author hopped on the RAAC wagon.
Ending/Paula's Confession not consistent with Part 1
This story did a one-eighty degree turn from BTB to RACC resulting confusion about Paula's story about the affair . In Part 1, Del finds her overnight bag with panties soaked with her arousal juices; a new night gown he had never seen soaked with semen and other items indicating that she was planning on spending the night with her lover. Then Del hear his brother John leave a message indicating that she meet him at their usual place. BTW: Del and Paula had planned for a long romantic weekend when he got back from his out of town trip. When he speaks to her she lies and speak sharply with him. Suddenly, in Part 2 we find out that Del and Paula had not made love in one year, Del has not held or touch her and she was desperately lonely. John her lover becomes this ruthless predator and she gives in and have sex with him just once to keep his friendship. Paula's account of that night is not consistent with the phone call left by John - he thinks that everything went great which differs from her statement of an angry man who she refused to have sex a second time. Paula's treatment of Del when he called at 8 am did not sound like a woman racked with guilt. In fact, since she normally leaves for work at 7:30 am she was running late for work which explains why she was rushing home. Lastly, if she was no tentative to meet John why would she buy a new night gown? If she was so neglected by Del for a year why was her cheating such a surprise to Del in Part 1?
Conveniently, John was unable to either confirm or deny any part of her story.
Most RAAC endings have the cheater accept primary responsibility for his or her actions supported by other contributing factors (e.g., spouse worked too hard; poor communications; interfering relatives or friends). In Part 2, Del who had placed high value on martial fidelity toss it aside for a one-nighter (just so Del and Paula would both be cheaters). We have the usual acceptance of blame by the victim and we have the villain the evil brother who after raising Del like a father try to ruin his 24 year old marriage. We also have Jessie his daughter who has support him in Part 1 suddenly turn against him in Part 2 causing him to rethink his position with Paula. Reconciliation as you observed is the prerogative of the non cheating betrayed spouse but Part 2 was written in such a way to drive the character Del to only one choice.
I agree, this story really needs editing to be internally consistent, and another ending IMO to fit with the first chapter.
First Jessica and then Lena felt like mouthpieces for the author's RAAC tendencies, to excuse the ham-fisted 'epiphany' and final choice that seemed out of character for Del.
English
Reconsiliation...Really?
I just don't understand the men and women in these stories. Is it the same stupid, stupid women in each story? Don't husband and wives in these stories ever talk? I guess if the women were not stupid and they actually talked to each other we wouldn't have stories. It was actually a good story until everybody kept telling him it was his fault. She planned this, she brought a bag with her sexy clothes, the brother called her at home to gloat over his conquest and plan for more. This guy needs a new daughter, wife and friends. It was not his fault. I would still blame her for not being there when the son had his problem. She is a cheat period. Another thing I don't understand is why the husband needs to know why she did it. She cheated, who cares what the reason is, she is a cheater. I saw the reconciliation coming and I kept hoping that I was wrong and he would keep some dignity.
I forgot who I was reading
so I wasn't prepared for his daughter to turn on him or for his wife to feel it was his fault because she didn't tell him she wasn't getting enough attention so she had to impale herself on his brother's cock to make up for it. And I guess I have to fuck all my female friends now so I can keep them. I know that you aren't writing anymore but gee whiz why couldn't you give it a rest about the fact that he expected fidelity from his wife and faithful family members was just his male ego and his pride. The fact that he had expectations of his wife keeping her vows and she chose not to is not a flaw on his part.
Total Disbelief
The behavior of the daughter and the father after what he was put through is beyond belief or believeability. Terrible.
a situation
In most of these cases no one is really innocent or guilty,it hapens so many times most of the times it doesn't get out but when it does it can be dramatic ,i know the storys here on lit allmost allways blame the woman but is the husband so innocent? a woman ignored can feel the need for attention and when the right person with the right talk and moves comes along she might sucomb to the temptation ,if hubby wouldn't have ignored her ,had payed attention to her i'm sure this never would have happend ,he should have been there not his brother,one mistake,even as big as it was shouldn't mean the end of the world if both recognise theyr fault
A final word ,the biggest cheaters are men ,the fall to temptation much easier just to see nice breasts or a cute ass ,please just be honnest about it
Funny thing
A funny thing about most marriages that go the distance (until the kids are grown) is that by that time, the relationship is pretty much shot. There has been so much scar tissue built up the only thing holding the marriage together are the scabs. I can understand how the emotionally weak would feel the need to stay in a shitty, adulterated marriage, but a stronger person would have to guts to call it a day and to move on. Living with someone that you do not trust or like is much worse than living alone. If you desire companionship, get a dog or two. If you want a real marriage, find someone who is strong enough and caring enough to be a wife. While there are plenty of decent women out there, there are a lot more indecent women out there too. So chose carefully.
what a crap
his wife cheat and her daughter is just stupid as her mother. you tried to blame del in this chapter but it aint working, it just make him a wimp. they should just divorced and move on with their life. what a cuck story
Good read
I liked it. Mostly believable but as already said she should have talked with him ( husband) and told him how she felt not replace his affection with another mans.
Only Fair
“It's not my place to tell Jim about what mom did. That's between Jim and mom.” – That’s right, it’s between Jim and MOM, SHE should tell Jim, not put it on Del’s shoulders!
I’m not often in agreement with the hard-liners here, but this putting all the blame on him is aggravating! So she didn’t/doesn’t “love” John – so what! She had SEX with him! It’s up to Del to decide IF and/or WHEN to divorce, and if he’s not ready, and if his hesitance is causing problems, then regardless of how much she doesn’t want a divorce Paula needs to force the issue and file herself! Del is the wronged party here, and doesn’t deserve any harassment.
He SHOULDN’T feel any guilt! While not LEGALLY separated, they HAVE been separated for months, and he shouldn’t be expected to be a monk for all that time.
Does he have some blame for not acting more loving towards her? Sure! But what about HER? Was SHE coming on to him? No halfway healthy, normal man is going to reject the advances of his loving wife, ESPECIALLY if she has stayed in shape!
Again, if she felt that she and Del were drawing apart, what did SHE do to correct that?
I don't have a particular problem if he feels that he can trust her enough to reconcile, in some ways it's not that much different than if they DID divorce and he met a woman who had cheated before, but I don't like how much of the blame still seems to be shunted onto him.
THE MAKE UP AFTER THE FAUX BREAK DOWN.
and its hard to hide your ego for the family good.. TK U MLJ LV NV
fuck you, author!
what's this shit?
she'd been a whore, a bitch and a shrew for a year, what's there to talk about?
this chapter was crap.
This is what's wrong with Literotica
She cheats with his brother, look at the end. He says " My brother John was not invited and he did not attend. I haven't spoken to him since that day in the hospital. He did send a card, postmarked Costa Rica, but no other return address. I don't care to ever see him again." So let me get this right, your holding your brother to a higher standard than your wife. She's forgiven, the one you took vows with, the mother of your children, the one who said forsaking all other. Family members fight all the time. But your not spending the rest of your life with your brother. Your placing most of the blame on him and the husband. Is his wife made out of glass, did her brain crack while she was on his brothers dick? Wow, there's this 2 letter answer for him getting some pussy, "NO" how hard was that. (2)
1 * this shit
all RAAC stories are the same. his dumb cunt of a daughter blames him for tearing their family apart. not her mother for having a long affair with his brother. no its all his fault. i only wish i could give it a lower score.
I am btb camp camp fan. In 99%
I was about to btb when the wife left about where she was. I had to ask myself from the husband perspective. Would he be happier married or divorced. He choose. That didn't make him any less of a man. It his decision. Comparing her to most wives of the consequences series and husband response. I would not judge his decision harshly.
I'm sorry...? She WHAT...?
See, I admit, once it started to be HIS fault that SHE slept with someone else (giving me the author's mindset in this story) I started skimming instead of honestly reading...
Now it sure seemed to me like I read HER say that she slept with the brother because that was (effectively) the cost of keeping his companionship... Did I get that right...? If so, he NEEDS to divorce her...
Not because sure slept with someone else... but because her REASON indicates she's willing to pay someone WITH her body to stay her friend (incidentally, "being friends" being one of the things you shouldn't have to "pay" someone for), and why would he trust her to not repeat it for ANOTHER "friend"...?
Because she promised...? Because she VOWED not to...? Yeah, like that stopped her the first time...? Eh!! Game over.
Oh, and another killer to the marriage...? Her saying she didn't KNOW why she finally succumbed... If SHE doesn't know, how do you ever KNOW it won't happen again...? Without that assurance, you're just waiting for some unknown action or thought to cause a repeat...Who needs THAT kind of aggravation...?
And HIM...? Paraphrasing, "I know she feels bad for having cheated and I feel bad THAT she cheated... so we should just feel bad together." Of course, with that kind of thinking, just imahine how close they can be as she cheats with other people and they can share THOSE pains too...
5 for story and content. AND becasue
it pissed off dear annony! Good LW story
Confused
So the phone message that Del heard somehow doesn't reflect the story as related by the wife.
Phone message: "Hey babe, where did you go? I woke expecting to find you still in bed beside me. Please call and let me know where you are, OK? Last night was really great for me. Call me when you get in. I'd like to get together one more time before Finnie gets back. Why don't you meet me at our usual place. Call me. Love you."
Her explanation: "He wanted to do it again but I couldn't! I refused and he got angry. I didn't care. I just wanted to forget it and pretend it never happened. I curled up on the bed as he yelled at me and I think I passed out. At least I don't remember anything more until I woke up later and saw he was asleep. I dressed and left. I had just gotten home when you called."
There was a lot of good writing in this story but I find the justification for the reconciliation to be very weak.
**
Not sure where you went at the end. Where was she? Twilight Zone. And that's where this tale ended up.
Second time through...
Still five stars. Still love it. The end does not seem believable. She did it only once? Doesn't seem to fit the details in chapter one. The insertion of him not having sex with her seemed a convenient afterthought.
1*
I'm sure my vote will be removed. I don't care. I wish I could give this RAAC POS less than 1*.
Garbage
No way in hell a man takes back someone who cheated with a brother. That is just damage that no therapy is fixing.
Though I didn't like the players
I thought this was well written and conclusive.
5*
Though line to pull off
He knew his brother is a bitch at the same time he knew what he wasn't doing at home. The subject of a wife cheating with the brother is a very hard to deal with. Most people will not ever forgive either of the two for their betrayal.
For me it is possible to forgive the wife if she is the person you loved, believed when she expressed her regret for making the mistake. The brother like I said was a Bitch for even attempting to screw his brothers wife and family. For him to choose his family over his brother was made easier by his brothers actions. Writer a lot of people think a brother is just a piece of gold but, to be gold you have to be a good brother. In the beginning I through he would throw out his family for the brother until he told what he knew about his brother. Yes he broke her face when he told her about sleeping with Lena. He really didn't have to Paula after she felt the pain about her sleeping with the brother could have saved face.
Story miss
The brother needs some serious hurt (a contact out private parts), he should not be allowed to walk (run) from this.
Inconsistent characterisation
"That question was what stopped me from trying to get past this and save my marriage"
This and everything subsequent related to it was Inconsistent with his character from the first chapter. That guy would never in a million years history have considered reconciliation.
This chapter is not consistent with the first one in other ways also, feels like somewhere. between the first and second chapter the author hopped on the RAAC wagon.
Ending/Paula's Confession not consistent with Part 1
This story did a one-eighty degree turn from BTB to RACC resulting confusion about Paula's story about the affair . In Part 1, Del finds her overnight bag with panties soaked with her arousal juices; a new night gown he had never seen soaked with semen and other items indicating that she was planning on spending the night with her lover. Then Del hear his brother John leave a message indicating that she meet him at their usual place. BTW: Del and Paula had planned for a long romantic weekend when he got back from his out of town trip. When he speaks to her she lies and speak sharply with him. Suddenly, in Part 2 we find out that Del and Paula had not made love in one year, Del has not held or touch her and she was desperately lonely. John her lover becomes this ruthless predator and she gives in and have sex with him just once to keep his friendship. Paula's account of that night is not consistent with the phone call left by John - he thinks that everything went great which differs from her statement of an angry man who she refused to have sex a second time. Paula's treatment of Del when he called at 8 am did not sound like a woman racked with guilt. In fact, since she normally leaves for work at 7:30 am she was running late for work which explains why she was rushing home. Lastly, if she was no tentative to meet John why would she buy a new night gown? If she was so neglected by Del for a year why was her cheating such a surprise to Del in Part 1?
Conveniently, John was unable to either confirm or deny any part of her story.
Most RAAC endings have the cheater accept primary responsibility for his or her actions supported by other contributing factors (e.g., spouse worked too hard; poor communications; interfering relatives or friends). In Part 2, Del who had placed high value on martial fidelity toss it aside for a one-nighter (just so Del and Paula would both be cheaters). We have the usual acceptance of blame by the victim and we have the villain the evil brother who after raising Del like a father try to ruin his 24 year old marriage. We also have Jessie his daughter who has support him in Part 1 suddenly turn against him in Part 2 causing him to rethink his position with Paula. Reconciliation as you observed is the prerogative of the non cheating betrayed spouse but Part 2 was written in such a way to drive the character Del to only one choice.
I agree, this story really needs editing to be internally consistent, and another ending IMO to fit with the first chapter.
First Jessica and then Lena felt like mouthpieces for the author's RAAC tendencies, to excuse the ham-fisted 'epiphany' and final choice that seemed out of character for Del.
I would disown the daughter
divorce the wife and kick my brother in the nuts then to the curb, but that's just me.
Huedogg2
Excellent summary of this piece of trash.
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