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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Oh my goodness...

what a wild piece of 'Copulation', (which is the union of the external sex organs of two sexually reproducing animals for insemination and subsequent internal fertilization.) I can't call it 'lovemaking' because it almost resembled a WWF contest between two hated opponents. There must have been deep teeth marks and blood flying all over the place...Wild..oh so wild and the prey was..you know..well and truly fucked.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Raw lust unleashed as two discover their matching souls and needs, too long denied. Gentle making of love can wait for another time; now their passions unleashed and satiated.

TeeTeeTeeTeeabout 17 years ago
Primal

...to the core! Dayum girl, scorching hot write that keeps the mouth watering, the heart racing, and many things tingling for the next line. Thanks for the read :)

T_T

seth6138seth6138about 17 years ago
Very Nice Job

Great job, half way thru I was right there...involved

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