All Comments on 'Woman's Day'

I had to give this a 5/5 and a 100%, the writing reminded me of this clip

http://trailers3.bangbros.com/publicinvasion/bigtrailer/publicbig.wmv

which I find hilarious. I don't know if the author intended that effect, but I had a great time with this story (plus, N/C is always hot.)

but that does not stop you from getting an editor so you can have actual complete sentences, to say the least.

Every of my stories is corrected with some editor or editors and they are free to do any changes. My ICQ is 310370930

I'm an author of that and I can tell you my english is good enough, I'm certficated by British Council. I want to say I write in English, not American!!!!!!! Try to put many juicy phrases in english, but it's too hard to do that. I make less mistakes than many stories I wrote here. To tell the truth, 3 editors from literotica edit my stories before releazing them. If you want to et in touch me my ICQ is 310370930 and my e-mail is sluttish_88@yahoo.com

...but your English (whether of the British or American variety) is simply not good enough to make yourself understood any better than "marginally." If you have three editors reviewing your work, you need to fire them immediately because they aren't doing what they need to do.

Keep up the great work!

And don't mind the nit-pickers.

There are multiple versions of English in the world...

i couldnt follow the story at all, the sentences were broken, very sporadic, the spelling is atrocious, i couldnt even make it halfway through the story, as much as i wanted to, because the concept is very good, i just wish it had been more understandable.

I'm so sorry if you think my stories are unreadable, because they were editted by Literotica's editors!!!!!!!! And I didn't check'em and just submit'em to this site!

I can't spell or write well at all. I figured the english was written so as to portray a Arab or Indian and his buddys. No problem understanding it. The English for the most part speak English. Us American"s speak a bad form of english. (Ask any English Man.) The rest of the world for the most part speak with a accent or a less fluent flow. When I was in Spain my accent was so bad locals could not understand I was ordering a Ham sandwitch. Don't get offended by the English Teachers on the site. They read your story so it was not that bad.

LOL

I'm learning Russian, and I think that some of the spelling and grammar errors are just part of the translation from Russian to English. Ex: I noticed on another of your stories that you've written Gonolulu vs. Honolulu (it's common in Russian to put a "G" where we would usually put an "H".) While it may be distracting for English speakers, I think some of the comments are awfully harsh. I find your stories quite readable, and even pleasurable to read! Also, a factor may be the unique Russian sense of humor, which I thought was very present in the dialog of this story. The character of that is somewhat lost in translation, which being a Russian, I'm sure you understand, since you guys are always talking about your "Russian soul" and how no one else can understand it. ;) Anyway, мне очень нравится твои рассказы!