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good
Well crafted with a well developed metaphor. Like this.
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A drink and a good cigar; nothing's as easily handled and fixed as that calming pair. Leave life's tribulations to solve themselves.
Sitting..
in a dim and dismal bar sipping on whiskey and revisiting the past.. nicely done.
Your poem has been mentioned
in today's New Poem Reviews. Fooly, you make me want to pull up a stool next to you and order the same. I love these lines:
I round the ash of my cigar
With greater deliberation than I’ve used
When making many life decisions.
Great stuff...thanks for the read.
you've set the scene
and you do it so well. I agree with the "well_crafted" comments , I can only agree and say that I enjoyed this very much :)
*****
Five.
1ST ONE IS GOOD
the 2nds always better. TK U MLJ LV NV
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