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by northbaybear02/18/07

That uncommon lesbian story...

...to me. Longing is universal; seduction is, too. We all know hot sex when we read it. This has all of it in a tight and hot package.
It's great to read, even if it's fiction, two people going for it with each other. Then, the unexpected twist at the end. Very good.

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by hammer1702/18/07

Yes!

Great story, Please I think another chapter is in order. It has both hott sex, and love with respect. The respect was when Paula DIDN'T try to steal Linda from her husband, but wanted to include him into their Lovemaking!! Great job..

Paul

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by Anonymous02/19/07

Typical male fanyasy

Gotta bring a man into the story. Cant have two women wanting JUST one another. Also gotta bring a man with a big cock. So typical. Yawn.

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by Anonymous02/13/10

Story

Needs more detail & neeeds to be longer

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