The story itself was fine, but this isn't an Interracial story...all members involved are black...
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Anonymous02/18/07
sick
should have read niggers fuck like animals and nigger bitches like w3hite cock better
by
Anonymous02/19/07
No Imagination
This "writer" has no idea of how to construct logical sentences, much less paragraphs. He has no knowledge of how to apply the rules of punctuation and grammar is beyond him. In short, he's not a "writer" in any sense of the word. The subject matter only makes that worse. There's absolutely nothing in this "story" you haven't read in a hundred other stories. Add a total lack of imagination to the list of woes from which this "writer" suffers.
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Anonymous02/19/07
Not so typical as sooo Boring
I have read some boring stories but this really takes the biscuit,Get a real job, live life & develop fantasies
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Anonymous12/30/07
Bad bad bad
terrible. you don't know how to describe and use adjectives, and the story isnt remotely interesting.
English
Wrong genre...
The story itself was fine, but this isn't an Interracial story...all members involved are black...
sick
should have read niggers fuck like animals and nigger bitches like w3hite cock better
No Imagination
This "writer" has no idea of how to construct logical sentences, much less paragraphs. He has no knowledge of how to apply the rules of punctuation and grammar is beyond him. In short, he's not a "writer" in any sense of the word. The subject matter only makes that worse. There's absolutely nothing in this "story" you haven't read in a hundred other stories. Add a total lack of imagination to the list of woes from which this "writer" suffers.
Not so typical as sooo Boring
I have read some boring stories but this really takes the biscuit,Get a real job, live life & develop fantasies
Bad bad bad
terrible. you don't know how to describe and use adjectives, and the story isnt remotely interesting.
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