belongs. I did a career in the military and I have to agree with the futility of trying to make others believe as we do. I think the Hawks from the military are some of the biggest Doves there are. I liked the story. Life is better than emptiness or death. He finally understood what he had and kept it. Hell, I don't know, I just liked it. Ron
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Anonymous03/03/07
Great
I hope we all learn the futility of war before it is too late.
Boyd
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Anonymous05/05/08
:)
As i said you have poetry in your heart.. I'm happy for you.. Just keep on writing.. Yoron.
Like the movie Interstellar, exploring the meaning of life, the connectedness of our universe, the value of time and redemptive qualities of love. You are one of my favorite writers.
Would very much enjoy hearing why youturned off scoring, this was a 5 for sure.
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Anonymous11/11/16
Damned Clever
Highly Imaginative (I don't want to think it's real) and excelently written
Thank You
HP
English
Excellent
This is good writing!!!!!!
I don't know, but I think Romance is where it
belongs. I did a career in the military and I have to agree with the futility of trying to make others believe as we do. I think the Hawks from the military are some of the biggest Doves there are. I liked the story. Life is better than emptiness or death. He finally understood what he had and kept it. Hell, I don't know, I just liked it. Ron
Great
I hope we all learn the futility of war before it is too late.
Boyd
:)
As i said you have poetry in your heart.. I'm happy for you.. Just keep on writing.. Yoron.
would have liked to vote, this is a 5*
Surreal, but wonderful.
wow
I will be thinking about this for a long time.
I now have to go read more by Adrian Leverkuhn.
I wish I could have voted.
thanks - keep writing
One of my favorites.
Stunning
Like the movie Interstellar, exploring the meaning of life, the connectedness of our universe, the value of time and redemptive qualities of love. You are one of my favorite writers.
Would very much enjoy hearing why youturned off scoring, this was a 5 for sure.
Damned Clever
Highly Imaginative (I don't want to think it's real) and excelently written
Thank You
HP
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