All Comments on 'Dark Pleasure Ch. 00'

by thoros

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ghscrubbiesghscrubbiesabout 17 years ago
Interesting!

Great prologue. Loved the idea that we don't know their names and getting a glimpse of what brought them to this point. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Interesting beginning.

with many ways that it could go. You might try reading over it one more time during editing, to catch the little things you missed. Otherwise, it was fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Got pulled into it!!

The writing is wonderful and I really get pulled into the story. Ones simply wants to know what will happen next.I cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter, I will be patiently waiting.

angelwings1027angelwings1027over 16 years ago
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!111

Plese update its been months since you last updates please do so!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Is there more?

Very Intriguing. I wish there was more to read. Won't you please update?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow!

Great prologue, you should definatly continue writting this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

OH Come On..You Cant Leave it Like That, if Your Not Going to FUCKING Finish it Dont Fucking Write it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
GREAT BEGINNING

I THINK YOUR ARE ON TRACK. LETS SEE WHAT IS UP NEXT

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