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Hmmm...
I might be going crazy, but wasn't this story posted before? Nicely done either way...
I liked the ...
I liked the slow build up and the hot finish keep it up
it was nice
it was a nice story
If only work was like this!
Wouldn't it be great when you met random strangers that things like this happened.
Great story, tasteful and hot... just what I needed.
Very good!
The story starts hot and stays hot - very well done!
Wow
An absolutely fantastic story.
Please write more like this.
I thoroughly enjoyed pleasuring myself whilst reading this fantastic tale.
xxx
Question
Okay so this happened to be the first story in the Romance category I've read. But I have to wonder is it a romance story if you have a couple of sex scenes with 'I love you' thrown in for good measure? There was no development of love between them... they dated for a couple of months but it seemed boring. If you don't care why should I?
Awesome~
I think you have an amazing talent. I love the combination of love and erotic. This story left me with some unanswered questions though.. we never did find out who Chris Mathews was, or the why and how the two of them got set up. :-P I'm nosy! I want to know. :D
okay
The story is okay . I think it needs A little more info. maybe about their past.
Their dreams, failures, a little more depth into who they are. Keep writeing, I am
sure you can put more into your writeing.
L♥ve it ~!
Loving the way you write!
Faved the story -
- and you're my first faved author here.
- WI -
Perfect
I really loved this story. My only complaint is that it didn't last long enough, but it was still a wonderfully romantic and "Hot" tale. Keep up the great work.
MP
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