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This is more
This is more than the lead in claimed. Another sneaky, nasty story that turns to romance in the end. I don't have a clue why anyone would complain about this one, but some will. You could have written more about the previous spouses or what happens next, but it isn't nessesary. This is just a fun story, I hope the rest enjoy it as much as I did. Three from you in two days, we readers are lucky. What fun it is!
No Complaint
Excelent story. If someone complains (and someone will) ignore them. They are to dumb to enjoy lite stories.
Very Very Nice Romance
This one reads as smooth as the Dom they were drinking.
Sucess
Perhaps you should rethink your definition of success.
Fun and well written
I enjoyed it. Thanks for a good story.
Great
Natural follow-up to your recent essay. Reminds me a little of "Do We Have to be in Love?". My comments about that story also apply to this one.
Boyd
You suck.
Let's leave politics out of it. You write badly, your characters are as shallow as I imagine the author (sic) to be. I suggest you read a thesaurus, expand your vocabulary, try to be a little less smug, and you just might find that human beings actually do have differing philosophies, and then - you might possible pen something besides sophomoric jerk-off drivel.
You know, if one person tells you you're a horse, you can say they're full of shit. Maybe even 2 people; but by the time 10 people tell you you're a horse (or some equine body part), buy a saddle.
Wonderful
I've been reading romance stories for almost ten years now, novels and novellas. Your story was wonderful, the only thing that confused me some was the point of view. But the plot and characters were wonderful. Continue writing, maybe you should try writing to get published, just tone down on the sex if you do that. But I believe you can because unlike most writers on here you were able to include more than just sex and make it seem beliveable.
go on
just continue. it can't be better.
Jan
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