All Comments on 'On Guard'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
nice story

very good story, hope to see much more from you

NookiehunterNookiehunterabout 17 years ago
Every Soldier's Dream

There is nothing more boring than guard duty and this story represents every soldier's dream, especially if he is on guard duty. It is as far from reality as possible and it is wonderful.

Thank you.

Nookiehunter

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonabout 17 years ago
Now, why couldn't that have happened to me...

I did my share of guard duty in the military, but nothin' like that ever happened to me. Well done.

MorriguMorrigualmost 17 years ago
Loved the anticiaption

There's a real sense of anticipation here and the scene is set so well. I also love the humorous comment from the girl at the end.

~photoguy~~photoguy~over 16 years ago
nice work !!

great story ... short and to the point... dangerous sex is such a turn-on

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