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One word too many!
The last 'no' was just one word too many!
A Short Tale!
Yes, this is a short tale BUT it says it all. All that's left is the legal stuff and who cares why, when, how, etc. It's over. Thanks for a very poignant story.
man you write well... but.....
But almost all your stories are incomplete. And really not worth reading..
Almost like a premise. Where is the actual story??
I'm mostly disappointed after reading your stuff.
Sorry
Here I was intently reading (and enjoying) this story when all of a sudden "boom", it ended. WTF!!!!!!!
I mean, you have really pissed me off. This story is totally incomplete.......
I should have read the ending before I started and I could have saved myself a lot of time.....nuff said......
1*
why doesn't this moron finish his shit?
Needs completion
He obviously still loves her and vice versus.
It seems that maybe counciling would either help them find out what caused it and or repair damage. Then they can heal together or separate. It needs another page or two bring completion.
Please take time to vote. A huge amount of time is devoted to writing a story,
Clearly not that much time when YOU CAN'T FINISH a single fucking story.
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