by BelleHoney
Great story You seem to understand that GAY men also have a romantic side same as Lesbians its just not sex ther is fore play and romance leading up to sex and the sex can be very gentle and loveable
This is a great continuation of your first chapter. The only problem is that you might want to edit further chapters before posting them. I found many errors that could easily be corrected. Other than that, your characters seem to be developing well.
Oh no, no, no! The description of the bedroom and bathroom is too much - I wish these characters all the luck in the world, but I can't read about a guy with such bad taste!