Destiny in Sweetwater Ch. 02

Editing

Don't know where the story is going, but if would be much more interesting without the gramatical errors. Too many little words left out or the wrong words used and I find that very distracting.
Trogted

Too many errors in what could be a good story.

C'mon proofread. Too annoying to read it with all the errors.

A lot of potential

With some polish, Belle, I believe you could really tell a great story. Keep up the good work!

Good story

and quite interesting, but I have to agree with several other comments in one respect. You should get someone to proofread for you.

Most of the better writers on this site have, and publicly acknowledge, their proofreaders/editors

good story

I like the story and I am curious now to where this is going. Please keep writing and watch out for those errors, they can turn a good story into a bad one.

This story is really going somewhere. I really want you to keep going with it. Please write more!!!!!!

I love a western

Like you are starting to write a good western romance....every GOOD writer I know has written one or tried to anyway....I wrote mine so keep it coming with yours.....one question: How does a babe from SA write a story about a girl in Texas.....-:) ole reb ES.COM

great!

great story hope you continue it soon and egnore all the gramatical error comments if all people can see r grammatical errors then they rnt really reading the story

what where is the rest of it.....you can't just leave it there!!!!! please write more!

will you continue the story

Hi, was wondering if you were going to continue the strory and see it through to the end, it is really a good story and i enjoyed it greatly, many thanks .