All Comments on 'I Want To Taste You'

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Ahh...

it seems that sweet flavors always exude from a man that you care for..nicely done.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Well now, talk about her wanting to eat you alive. Dinner is served.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Maybe

You might benefit from reading poetry as well as writing it. You might get some ideas about structure, rhythm and conventions there.

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