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by Anonymous05/11/13

Similar to Nici's story...

In that a cheating wife expects her husband to sit there and take it. I think that there would have been much more collateral damage. Both with the children and his and her parents. I think there might have been a fight over the kids by the grandparents. Children develope thier morals, sense of right and wrong, learn to deal with the stresses of growing up from thier parents more than anyone else. Now they have lost both. As a way of dealing with what's happening to him, well he just taught his kids to run away. I expect the wife would not simply go quietly into that good night. She would think that she would fight to keep her children and so a battle over them by bothe his parents and her would happen. His abandonment would come up. There's no winners here. So, yeah it reminds me of Nici's story.

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by cantbuymy05/11/13

yesit is nici's story but with a little btains and not so much fucking slut that nici appears to think was just fine.

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by Anonymous06/03/13

Well that was tough love!

Talk about walking into a room and exploding a bomb! I wonder if the wife thinks she's smart now? I'd love to see more stories where men didn't sit still for a cheating wife and showed her the errors of her ways. I did feel bad for the kids, but with the way the courts are set up these days, just being a good guy is sometimes not enough.

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by tazz31706/03/13

#2 SOLIDIFYING ONES SELF

turns into a win-win for him self. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by BDEarth09/12/13

You've got to love....

a good BTB story.

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by PearDrop310/13/13

Ten Stars

A great story.

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by fanfare10/30/13

good fiction

Agena, congrats on writing such a strong statement of purpose to BTB. This should be considered one of the better renditions of that genre. Very Film Noir. I liked that you wrote that the grandparents stepped up to the plate and were conveniently well enough off and willing to take in the children. And that Ron was making an effort to financially support his children.

Of course in real life, these wonderful coincidences never happen. In real life it just takes one medical emergency or other financial setback before the grandparents are seeking public welfare, just to keep their heads above water. Over a few months, within a year, Ron will be sending less and less money home as he gradually drifts away from fatherhood.

Since I am never one to pass up the opportunity to bitch-slap the BTB lynch mob that infests this site.

Best example: Family of five have one loaf of bread. Father leaves taking half the loaf with him. Mother is left to feed herself and two children with the remaining half.

Some asshole judge, enforcing legislative mandates or voter's initiatives {that most right wing assholes conveniently forget about} says that was not a fair split of the Family's loaf of bread.

The asshole judge orders that the bread be divided into four pieces, so none of the family go hungry. Father screams like a little bitch, that ain't fair to him, he earned it.

The court retorts to Father, so YOU would have YOUR children go hungry so YOU can fill up your fat gut? YOU are willing to throw the family YOU fathered, YOU created, onto public welfare to burden taxpayers, so that YOU can eat to YOUR content?

If you 'manly men' are incompetent to fight for your marriage, I gotta ask, why do you even bother to get married? 

When an Aggressor/Predator/Enemy threatens, so many of the commentators and a number of the authors on this site choose to run away and cower instead of taking up arms against a sea of troubles.



Wasn't that the point of marriage in the first place? To defend the Wife You chose? To protect the Family You created? To nurture in a safe environment the Children You fathered?


Ahhh, you are not being respected! You poor little dears, what are you? Perpetual twelve year olds? Dribbling some sperm may define you as male but it is accepting responsibility that defines you as men.

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by FD4510/30/13

fanfare

Here is the failure of your reasoning...and I DO agree with some of your points. (BTW, drop the political chip on your shoulder)

IF some Lothario is coming onto my wife, and she indicates her displeasure at his advances, I will be forthright in my defense of her. That is my function.

Now...if some Lothario comes in and my wife says 'no...leave him alone. I like the attention he is paying me just fine.' then we have TWO conflicts: the wife wanting extra attention at my expense and me vs. the Lothario. Wife is DEFENDING the POS for reasons of her own. I am now stuck dividing my efforts into 'winning over' someone who should already be on my side AND fighting off this fucker. This makes me less effective.

If my wife starts FUCKING the Lothario, she has pitched her tent in the enemy camp... Who exactly am I fighting for at this point? At this point, I fight for the kids. Because in this story, wife didn't say 'oops...I fell for a line of shit and I dropped my panties. I hurt you BADLY and I need to get my head on straight.' THAT is a woman who has not left hubby's camp.

THIS woman said "If you get in the way of what I want, I will destroy you as much as I possibly can.'

So...while I see your point of fighting for a marriage, in THIS story...there was no wife left to fight for.

I agree with the asset thing though.

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by Anonymous10/30/13

fd45 never had kids

No one, I mean no closet-cucks running, lotharios cumming, dumb wives slumming, going to make me abandon my kids _ "Oh, I sent some $$ to start a college fund."

Fuck you.

Any cockless wonder-turd who runs like a fucking pussy never should've had kids in the first place so maybe the little bastards are better off not being raised by a wuss and a cheater.

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by Anonymous10/30/13

huecuck, BILLY, zed0 the ped0, HiV all loved this fag story

sums it up, gaggle of eunuchs moaned for this "run away!" story just proves it is a cuck-in-the-closet tale for insecure and easily frightened deranged virgin neckbeards.

All I can say is thank Christ those eunuchs can't have kids....

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by Bfreetorun11/26/13

Second time I have read this good story.

Despite the criticism of grammar, spelling etc. I thought it was a really good story. I will just make this comment: it is the attitude of this woman and others like her that are the cause of so many murders. Those of us with flash tempers often do things without thinking in a fit of rage, I make no excuse for their actions but I certainly understand. A few minutes later they are sorry (unlike this bitch, she was not sorry) but by then it is too late. Que sera, sera. Good read.

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by Anonymous12/13/13

I gave this a 5+

This little story has more truth in it than most do, and it does give reason to why many men have to leave their family instead of staying and put in a situation of losing everything. The laws of this country have been turned against men that aren't the fault in the marriage betrayal. A woman can even have ilegitamant children and get financial aid from the government to raise them. The story was great even if it is fictional.

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by Anonymous01/25/14

great outcome

all cheatings should end with same results whether man or woman,,, go from a family to nothing,,,,not even her lover, who contributed in her, and his, demise.
of course the cucks commenting,,, think it unfair she lost it all.

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by betrayedbylove01/25/14

Oh Yeah

Great tale. Stupid cheating skank slut cunt whore wife. Was it worth ruining your whole life for a strange cock? Going by this tale, I guess not.

Ha

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by Lickideesplit01/26/14

Observations

MickeyMouse aptly suggested that, once kids' custody was changed to Hubby's folks, Hubby could visit as often as he desired - or them, him!

DWartNut seems to know nothing about SocSec or IRS policies! Even if Sweetie(?) were to file for divorce and get a County Court warrant, the Feds would NOT get involved, especially if the kids had adequate care and means!

IMO, Hubby made lemonade from the lemons which were forced on him. Good lemonade, if we acknowledge The Mouseketter suggestions.

4*

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by Huedogg202/17/14

fanfare, you ingorant slut......."SNL" reference

Fight for what, the whore wanted to cheat and some how a the husband is suppose to fight for his "WIFE". She married him, she gave birth to the kids, but hey she's entitled to get a strange while he's at work, huh. Your whole rant was that of a mad psycho chick. She fuck off and got burned, Life goes on! And more men just disappear that you know.

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by ifeanyi02/19/14

very good story

A galaxy of stars!

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by Anonymous03/08/14

Odd the reasoning of some people...

Sometimes there are men who say to their spouse "If you leave me (or try to leave me), I will kill you." Taking the attitude that since they married their spouse that spouse is now THEIRS, like property.

And many people REASONABLY consider that a crock... you don't OWN your spouse... you can't MAKE them do whatever you want...

And yet... when your spouse says "I'm going to fuck around," suddenly you're SUPPOSED to be able to tell them they can't...?
It still applies... you don't OWN your spouse.. you can't MAKE them do whatever you want..

So when your wife says "I'm going to cheat and I'll ruin you if you try to divorce me," and she's RIGHT about the divorce part, why should you be forced to play by the rules of a game designed to punish you when the other person cheats...?

Imagine playing football where you get penalized yards when the other team goes offsides...
Who in their right mind would keep playing...?

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by Oldpart03/24/14

Well done

I agree with others a bit more development of the characters would improve the story. Still a different slant than most LW stories, and to me more realistic.

Let me give a real life example how screwed up the divorce system can be. I was divorced at 35 from one of the biggest sluts I have ever heard of. I was advised that the wife always got the children unless she could be "proved" to be a health problem to them. Didn't have have a thing to do with anything else.

Oddly when I increased the the child support she bitched because this put her over the limit for some welfare benefits. What a screwed up system (this was in fla.) She then married an 18 yr old, who was somewhat retarded. Even talked to his mother but she decided to let them go ahead. So at least there was no more "separate maintenance". Actually I felt sorry for the poor kid; she screwed any thing available, even offered me some. I had already had one round of STD and didn't want another.

One more comment, in Fla at the time (1980's) I discovered the hard way that canceled checks were not proof of child support payments, instead payments to the court system were much easier and they kept all the records.

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by rightbank03/31/14

she lost her job, the house, a car, and family

so did he. he ran away leaving the kids behind.

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by Anonymous04/24/14

Good story

RANT ON: "You would also loose custody of the children."

Please, please, please Lit authors, learn the difference between 'lose' and 'loose'. RANT OFF.

I enjoyed it other than leaving his children behind. As soon as it was evident his ex couldn't take care of them, he should have moved them in with him.

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by SplitAces07/05/14

Right on!

The only reason for the scorched earth tactics here is our corrupt judicial industry! It is owned by the left, and as Monkcalm so aptly described; their goal is clearly the destruction of marriage and family. I suspect few marriages are without strife and mine has been no exception. On more than one occasion, my wife has demanded a divorce. In every case, the only reason was to force me to cave in to her demands. I always told her to go ahead, but you'll be on your own. I won't get a lawyer. I won't go to court. I won't pay alimony or child support. I will quit my high paying, very stressful job, and you will never see me again. For some reason she always saw the light and got off her high horse. We're still married after 36 years; but if I had played the game, I doubt I could claim that to be true.

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by Anonymous08/24/14

a result of the

corrupt non American justice system.

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by Anonymous11/16/14

@SplitAces

I can understand why your wife would want to divorce you, like most REPugs you think you know what you are talking about but rarely have a clue. Let me guess, climate change is a myth, gun ownership is a religion to you and voter ID laws are greatly needed. You really need a rectumectomy. You need your head forcibly removed from your ass.

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by Anonymous11/16/14

yes a republican

climate change has been happening for millions of years and it happened without you owning a SUV. As a matter of fact the little ice age did not end until the 1880's and Frankenstein starts out with the monster in the frozen north because it was so cold that the author had to write a story about it. Greenland is still not as warm as it was when it was discovered as we need modern earth moving equipment to dig up Viking graves, or did they have earth movers in 1100 AD?
The 2nd amendment was not written to protect your right to go duck hunting.
and if you need ID to get a plane or train ticket, to cash a check, to use a credit card, and even to enter a number of government buildings, why not an ID to protect the most precious right in the world, the right to effect who and how those who govern us are chosen.

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by sinsational8311/29/14

yay !for the good guys

this story....... I liked it a lot, glad he found his way for getting rid of the selfish whore without hurting himself too much.

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by betrayedbylove11/29/14

Nice

This proves that all cheaters are fucking stupid. Worthless cunt actually believed he would go along with her affair. She got what she deserved.

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by impo_6011/29/14

The only sad thing...

The only sad thing in this story was he had to be separated from his children...She deserved all that happened at her, because she was stupid as a rock...

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by Anonymous11/29/14

Different

A good revenge and without murder BTB. The cheating wife was similar over the top impertinent woman Carol was in FrancisMacomber's story "Six O'clock News Slot" and she got same answer. However FrancisMacomber's story the husband was more succesful...........5*****

Duna

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by tazz31712/03/14

I SHOULDNT THINK

fainting is an answer. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Irfon01/08/15

Yes

...there ARE still people out there that do things like that today !! So selfish....

Sorry to see the kids are without their ONE decent parent..........sigh............

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by Anonymous01/08/15

LIKE

A very good BTB story.

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by xtchr01/13/15

Intriguing Story!

This story really got me thinking. I like what he did to the cheating wife and lover. She was just a stupid, selfish cheater. HOW could she live with a person for 16 years and not know him and think he would put up with her cheating? She is another stupid, stupid woman and got what she deserved.
I felt bad for the husband not seeing his kids grow up. Thanks for an interesting story.

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by Tootight102/16/15

loved it

there is validity, in staying together for the kids, if that's possible. in this case, hubby read the situation correctly, according to the story. maybe the hubby or wife had some cuckold fantasies they wanted to try, but that wasn't the case here. loved the conclusion in the story, but think the legality of it was a bit stretched, but I'm not an attorney. he was able to get a lot done in one day though. nicely done, please continue writing.

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by sinsational8302/27/15

Nice

The one thing I thought about is after all that tie why didn't he come back for the kids and take them with him there's nothing she would be able to do about it

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by Anonymous03/12/15

I Love It When The Slut Gets Burned

You did good with this one. There are so may writers who fall over themselves to go for some sort of reconciliation after a slut cheats on them and then rubs their nose in it. You burned the bitch. Bravo!

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by Anonymous03/16/15

nice

not perfect but i liked it.

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by Anonymous03/31/15

Good one!

I guess it was a shadow of my own story.

I'm finally single, but it is because I'm a widower now, instead of a divorcee. My own story was remarkably similar, with the exception of me catching them in bed during a lunch break. I'd returned home to pick up some forgotten files and found my wife with her boyfriend in the saddle, pounding away with that old familiar slapping sound.

Rather than kill them both, I simply walked in, picked up the forgotten files and left. My wife shrieked, her boyfriend rolled off and they were still cowered under the covers when I left, not uttering a single word. I returned to work, finished my day and walked into my boss' office. After explaining, I quit and he cut me my final paycheck with a nice bonus included. He knew how hard I had worked for him and also wrote me out a quick recommendation letter too.

My wife was waiting when I returned home. She was twisting a handkerchief when I walked in, but I ignored her and headed for our bedroom. After fifteen minutes I was almost finished packing my stuff when she finally walked in. She broke into tears, wailing at the top of her lungs when she saw I was packing my shit. We'd talked about starting having the children we had planned for and it wasn't looking good, unless she was already pregnant. But if so, would it be mine or her lovers?

As I went through the house, taking things that were mine alone, she was screaming and crying, begging me not to leave. She was a beautiful woman, 29 years old, 5'7", 130lbs of lean fitness. I loved having a fit wife but I hated having a cheating wife. When I tossed my bags into my pickup and headed toward the garage to start loading my tools and guns up, she began pulling it all out of the truck. I pulled my bags from her hands while she screamed at the top of her lungs and threw them back into my truck, this time locking the door.

The neighbors must have heard the screaming because as I was just loading the last of my tools, I left the riding lawnmower for her, the police came roaring in. They began questioning us and when it became apparent, to them and all the neighbors gathering, that she'd cheated and I was leaving, things deescalated. To get my wife to stop screaming, they made me promise to tell her the motel I was staying in and that I'd call her in the morning. Of course, I promised on her mothers grave and pulled and left. In my mirror, I could see my soon to be ex wife on her knees still crying.

Passing by the motel I'd promised to stay in, I soon found myself on the open highway. Heading south from New Hampshire, I found myself on the interstate and set a leisurely speed, gas milage and not spending money was of the essence. After leaving work I'd stopped and cleaned out the savings account, leaving the little bit in checking. She had a good job and I was out of work...

I was in Florida by weeks end and sleeping in the back seat of my truck. It didn't take me but a couple days to find a job in construction, something I enjoyed but didn't pay as much as IT work. But the job I found was under the table day work and I was paid in cash at the end of each day. I worked with mostly Mexican and Cubans, finding there was a lot I needed to learn. They were friendly and quickly accepted me.

With my crewmates helping, I soon found a nice little shack, just right for a hurting single man who wanted to hide. It was on a lagoon in the Gulf and the rent was hardly anything. I had a rowboat that I could pull by hand to the waters edge from my shack and much of my diet was pineapple, coconuts and fish. Although my income wasn't great, with most of my money going into the bank, I was beginning to add to my former nest egg.

My wife never divorced me. She was in constant contact with my folks and they would always relay how they had just talked to her and how much she loved me, wasn't there some way of reconciliation? I ignored them when it came up and they finally got the hint when I asked dad if it was okay for mom to start dating.

That was 10 years ago, last month. She never divorced me, my folks said she was still waiting for me and wasn't seeing anyone. I didn't believe her although I learned it was true from her roommate. My folks warned me she was drinking too much, to dull the pain of my leaving, but I always threw it back in their faces, she was drinking because SHE destroyed our marriage.

My mom called the day they found her. Alcohol poisoning, she died in her vomit. She'd been working on a suicide note anyway, the booze got her before she had a chance to do it any other way. In the note she professed her undying love, but like I told my folks when they read it to me, if that was her idea of love, I would have not enjoyed seeing her hate.

I'm now free to marry my true love. The daughter of one of my Mexican workmates, we had been thinking of moving in together, although my future FIL expressly forbid it. It won't be long now though, it takes place next month. My own parents are refusing to attend, they feel as though I'm responsible for my ex's death. Too bad, they will kick themselves when they are grandparents in abstention.

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by tazz31703/31/15

NEVER MAKE THREATS PREMATURELY

especially when they are empty. TK U MLJ LV NV

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