All Comments on 'Brother, Sister, Husband, Wife Ch. 02'

by velvet hammer

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goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
cute, but.....

these chapters are very short. it helps that each is with only one character and you understand them better, but, hard to get a flow going.

Westman99Westman99over 1 year ago

Nice follow up to Ch1.

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