All Comments on 'Fucking Machine'

by Otto26

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angelx602angelx602about 17 years ago
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Sure hope there is more to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well, I liked It

I liked this. Moderatly sexy, but very funny. It made me Giggle. My only reccomendation would be better breaks between the storyparts, like a line of stars or something so the definition was better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
"slant" LOL

i don't know why but that made me laugh for ages. love the characters just for that :).

calckidcalckidover 11 years ago
Awesome!

Should really be in humor though.

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I like strong, intelligent women. I like them bound and forced to serve. I like them resilient enough to survive when forced into bad situations. I like them clever enough to manipulate their situations. I like them crawling willing across the floor in pursuit of their dark de...

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