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Keeping on the Team Ch. 01

byLOAnnie2©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/24/07

continue

yes please continue

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by Bazzz02/24/07

Keep going

Seems like it could get interesting if you handle the plot well.

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by Anonymous02/25/07

more

more pretty please! :)

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by LB_200602/25/07

Can't wait for the next chapter

Two thumbs (and something else) up!

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by Redbeard195209/01/09

great story

Excellent story. I like how the events were told from the females point of view. The control angle is also a big turn-on for me. Looking forward to more from you.

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by PanicByNumbers03/13/11

ok

she sounds hot and slutty but I think you spent too much time in her thoughts

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by Anonymous11/12/12

missing

i feel like something is really missing from part one to part two

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by Goldeniangel04/30/13

Love the set-up!

Hot... I love that she's doing this for a reason and so it keeps her doing whatever he says even though she doesn't really want to. I especially how you balance how she would be enjoying it if he would do things a little diff vs. how she feels like a toy and so doesn't like it.

The mr. rosebud thing had me giggling too =)

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by Anonymous05/29/14

Yes!

Please continue! That was such a great story, I love things having to do with exercise and older-younger :).

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by MunchDK08/27/14

This

Was the hottest story I have found so far on Lit.
Thank you!

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