All Comments on 'Pain'

Love is full of so much pain. . .yet we continue to love. A Nonerotic submission or a long written poem of true heartache with the pulse of devotion woven within its words.

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Thanks,

Red.

Poetry or not? I don’t know, and I don’t care to know. I do know, feel, the poetry of the emotions, and that is all that matters to me. You did a great job of crystallizing everything down to necessities. I don’t need to know why. I only need to feel their emotions. Thank you for sharing. - Nici

a cryptic break-up of 2 people. TK U MLJ LV NV

the guy is a coward leave him to his sorry self...

Hes just no that into you.