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by Anonymous

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by Amyfriend02/20/07

Exciting...

The union between two lovers is simply priceless..

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by LeBroz02/20/07

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This joy on discovering each other, if only it could last forever.

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by Unbridled_Passion02/20/07

unions

can be pure bliss- nice poem

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by GothLord10/06/08

:)

i could feel you, see you, want you , need you, You made it so real, your words like a caress...

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