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If I were a smarter woman

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by LeBroz02/22/07

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Sounds like a woman at the end of her rope with only the superficial keeping her afloat.

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by 4degrees02/22/07

i liked

this in the 30/30, and had thought 'man that one should be submitted.' glad you received my telepathic nudge.
the ifs, ands and buts are infinite it seems.
always enjoy your stuff.

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by lindiana02/22/07

Wonderful

You captured an image in a few words. Well done.

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by Amyfriend02/22/07

Certainly very interesting..

and leaves food for thought....

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by LeBroz02/23/07

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This poem was mentioned in today's New Poems Reviews.


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by Anonymous02/23/07

nice flow

in the visuals...blue

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