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A Cold Day in Hell

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/10/07

too short

i feel like you rushed the story too much. there wasn't enough passion/erotica. nice plot though.

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by Voldemory07/04/09

not that erotic

it was ok but i wish you would have written more

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by Anonymous05/05/10

mmm

its was good but i read ALOT better ones...

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by Anonymous06/18/11

some twists and turns

I thought this story had some interesting twists and turns. Would like to see where it would go from here.

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