All Comments on 'A Cold Day in Hell'

by cutandhorny

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
too short

i feel like you rushed the story too much. there wasn't enough passion/erotica. nice plot though.

VoldemoryVoldemoryalmost 15 years ago
not that erotic

it was ok but i wish you would have written more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
mmm

its was good but i read ALOT better ones...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
some twists and turns

I thought this story had some interesting twists and turns. Would like to see where it would go from here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
cocksucking

Love to read cocksucking stories

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