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by bornagain02/27/07

Great going Mr_Data

Are you related to Mr_Data on Star Trek?lol
i really think you out did yourself but you have some words should have been removed before you wrote it try having a friend read the story and get his or hers opinion and if there is any mistakes remove them before typing it up and submitting your manuscript i would love to read more chapters to your story next time with Victoria and the two girls you met in the shop and maybe sara that would really be great to put in try it out.
Atlanta,Ga
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