All Comments on 'The Chemistry of Control Ch. 02'

Your story has been mentioned in the "New Story Review Thread" post 814, found in the Author's Hangout Forum on Lit's bulletin board.

Thanks,

Red.

There should be more, right? It doesn't end after the first short page?

Too bad there is no continuation of this story. It was starting to get really sexy.

As I read I was waiting for "The Story" to begin. Took till the last half of the last page to realise I loved the story and to realise I would remember this story for a long time.

Seems to me that is the idea that should be in my brain when I finish a quality story.

Thank you Karyn