All Comments on 'Don't Say A Fucking Word'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
excellent until the end...

great story, builds very well. however, in my opinion, to have the male character say something so lackluster and common as "that was amazing" at the end completely ruins the feeling. i would have preferred that when finally given the permission to talk, he found himself...speechless. almost amazing story. keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
No that was stupid

Dumber than a stump

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
storyline

that was ok but needed less sex & a bit more of a storyline, where the ending grabs you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fucking in a car.

What are they? 15? Stupid.

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