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All Comments on 'Look Into My Eyes, My Love'
by Peter Duncan
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LeBrozabout 17 years ago~~
Another one of your pieces with such excellent imagery. But I must admit to being disappointed at the ending, "copious load." It sounds so self-aggrandizing. I'd suggest creamy but that sounds like such a cliché.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoMmmmmm... I kind of loved this poem..
It certainly adds to the pleasure of both when you keep eye contact..
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