by jara_jacobus
Goodness. I absolutely love the story but what happens next!?!? I want to see more! More more more! Make a second chapter or something otherwise I'm going to complain long and loudly (which is what my boyfriends do often enough!) Anyway. Loved it!
I enjoyed the story. Seems jara is lazy about writing long story.A bit of more action could have added value to the story..like taking the wench for slave trade to the arabs and into their harems.
Wow! I really liked this story, and I wished it was more or another story like it!
good idea, good material with potential. Country girls may give in that easily but they certainly do not override years of training to be 'proper'
Also, this is a beautifully crafted story.
As long ad the writer doesn't offend this site.cares little it has no editors running it just Lawryers fearful of law suits another notch added to the already growing list congress are looking into, won't be long now