All Comments on 'Ravished Wench'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More please!

Goodness. I absolutely love the story but what happens next!?!? I want to see more! More more more! Make a second chapter or something otherwise I'm going to complain long and loudly (which is what my boyfriends do often enough!) Anyway. Loved it!

KingfishersKingfishersalmost 17 years ago
Short but hot.

I enjoyed the story. Seems jara is lazy about writing long story.A bit of more action could have added value to the story..like taking the wench for slave trade to the arabs and into their harems.

mihirvivekamihirvivekaabout 16 years ago
Great

Great story please continue!

NicholeDNicholeDalmost 12 years ago
Interesting!

Wow! I really liked this story, and I wished it was more or another story like it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
boring

good idea, good material with potential. Country girls may give in that easily but they certainly do not override years of training to be 'proper'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
RAPE

IS RAPE AND NOT A GOOD SUBJECT EVEN FOR THIS SITE

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
RE THE PERSON WHO CRIED RAPE: OMG SHUT UP AND GET OFF THIS SITE.

Also, this is a beautifully crafted story.

ImpossiblefutureImpossiblefuture10 months ago

As long ad the writer doesn't offend this site.cares little it has no editors running it just Lawryers fearful of law suits another notch added to the already growing list congress are looking into, won't be long now

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