At the risk of repeating myself, I'm impressed with how far you've progressed from those first rhyming poems to this much more seasoned poem. You've taken risks and experimented and done a grand job in the process. And, BTW, putting B&B in the Archival Review was an honor. It really deserves to be among the other fine poems that made the cut.
this poem was mentioned on the thread 'New Poem Reviews'
a fun journey to take- nice poem!
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