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by LasciviousSanity

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
~~

An air of resignation and sadness permeates.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
sad goodbye

maybe you are better off- I liked this poem, but all of the periods make it seem a bit static instead of flowing

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
"Good night, good night!

Parting is such sweet sorrow.".... (From Romeo and Juliet ) but it seems so apt for the moment.

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Hi. I'm M but I go by many names. LasciviousSanity around these parts. The only thing useful to know about me is that I love to write. At home, school, in the bathroom, or in a bar. Near or far. Up or down, I write all over town.