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by LasciviousSanity

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A disturbing prose piece that starts off promising enough with images of soft romance that subtly transform into those of pain even as words of love remain the same. I think someone who's been in an abusive relationship could relate.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
tormenting

and so sad-nice writing!

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Hi. I'm M but I go by many names. LasciviousSanity around these parts. The only thing useful to know about me is that I love to write. At home, school, in the bathroom, or in a bar. Near or far. Up or down, I write all over town.