All Comments on 'Tracy's Reading Porn'

this kept my mind spinning and me laughing, good job.

I reviewed this story in the New Story Review thread of the Author's Hangout on the Lit Forums.

what a twist at the end. It was certainly humerous but the sex scenes were like the blind leading the blind, haha. Nice job with the story, thanks.

That was just remarkably stupid.

It was great right up to the improbable ending. Mom is cool with screwing the sister but you have to marry her?

I usually like my erotica more erotic and with less annoying characters. The guy shouldn't have fucked his sister, he should have smacked her silly. And his mother was next in line with her "commit to your sister".

What... Just because his sister is in love with him (while acting like he is the biggest piece of shit in the world)?

This story was just retarded. Next time try to write something sexy, because your writing skills aren't the problem, but your idea of what are interesting characters and situations is.

I could actually feel their love for each other despite the fact that they didn't know how to properly show it. Yes the siblings were annoying and the fact that the mother not only accepted their relationship but encouraged it was a little messed-up. But that's real! People aren't cookie cutter versions of a perfect harmony and reality. Sometimes you have to except love for what it is, no matter how messed-up it is. People that don't understand this will never understand it.

Good but a little unbelieveable. As for the people who voted 0, fuck off. This is a good story and deserves 75. And stop voting 0 while 'Anonymous' you pussies. You people really piss me off. Don't criticise, give feedback and advice! Well done sourdough999 don't listen to these assholes!!!

some predictable formula sex that is boring. Thanks for the read, I thought it was funny and good.

The quality of this story is leagues above some of the others here.

I enjoyed it, it seemed(as stated within the story itself) that it was a lot more realistic than most of the stories on this site, except for the end which just went crazy.

Still, good stuff.

This was a good story, but Tracy confused the hell out of me. If she wanted her brother, she should have just said so, instead of played those mind games. Saying one thing when you mean the opposite, and then getting mad. No wonder Spencer was confused, the poor guy.

My first erotic reading

Absolutely not my last

got to me...nice read and the sibling romance is funny but sweet...

Good one! Funny but serious too.