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Can I Love? Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by virgin226703/03/07

I like this story

Hey, this guy kind of makes you wonder if he is up to something. I mean already telling her he loves her and then going to her father behind her back. I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to see if he's really genuine.
I'm really liking this story.

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by Nightowl2208/25/07

Yep, unusual.

It kinda reminds me of the story of the suitor that comes on like Tom to a girl because he has found out she is an heiress, something even she doesn't know yet.. But that may be only a similarity.. He apparently, knows her from before their first encounter, though.. We have to hope our heroine doesn't get more emotional scars.. Good story!

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by Anonymous11/13/13

YOU REALLY NEED AN EDITOR!!!

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