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Her Inner Wolf

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/19/07

Love It!!!!!!

This was such a sexy and wonderfully well written story,please write more.

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by SadieRose07/02/09

I really enjoyed this story

but I'd love to edit it as well. My only gripe being that your tenses are all over the place which sometimes makes it hard to follow the narrative. And also, I think I'd wring out the suspense a little by having her not know until the end (when she wakes up and smells the... um... bacon) that Mick was the boy next door and do the sex scene in the woods in flashback to the time when he first bit her. But it's a good, pacy story with solid characters and some hot sex. :D

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by Anonymous05/02/10

not bad

A little rushed at the end with her already feeling the puppies but still a good story.

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